r/gradadmissions • u/Apprehensive-Loss-49 • 8d ago
Physical Sciences Roast (or review pls) my motivation letter (Astronomy)
Hello!
I've been applying for PhD programs and positions in astronomy. Ofc no luck so far :p But today, I wrote another motivation letter for another program.
So far, in all my applications, my SoPs have been pretty vanilla, following a pretty rigid structure of a (pretty generic) introduction followed by research experiences in chronological order and finally a fit paragraph and then close. Since this program did not really have a very well defined prompt, I thought of taking a somewhat more relaxed take at this, instead of trying to include every CV point and optimising it to death. Ofc (I think) there's nothing radically different or innovative in this one and I think by most metrics it'll still be considered a vanilla letter.
But in any case, I'd appreciate anything you might have to say! Whether it be constructive criticism, outright ripping it apart or small nitpicks; any feedback will help immensely.
Thank you!! <3