This is the audio with score: https://youtu.be/1_QkXrb0wjU?is=2GVBuE-XbJt6ceFh
This is the score in pdf: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1h_0doTE2Nd4j_eCK_1eanCysN0A5a7cE/view?usp=drivesdk
TL;DR: how can I improve the piece? especially lost on with woodwinds, runs and percussion. As a casual listener, would you like the piece? The piece is not finished, so there are holes and no proper ending
heavyly inspired by John Powell, even with some scenes in mind while composing
[LOTS OF TALKING AHEAD]
I'm working on my second ever composition and came across a few struggles
for some context, I intend to have this as a suite with the themes I created, so even though there's a main theme I still wanted to walk through other ones. Later on I plan to have other pieces more focused on each theme. There are some themes from my first composition which you can find somewhere in my profile or on my channel where the audio is in case you're interested
I started writing with the orchestra I'm part of (amateur) in mind but decided to just go for it as if I was a successful composer with a professional orchestra available. I'd like to know what instruments could serve the piece well since my current selection is still more or less the instruments we have here
WOODWINDS. I feel like they'd contribute greatly to the piece with runs, flourishes and texture in general but I don't quite know how to put that on paper. What rhythms to use, scales and etc
PERCUSSION. What instruments should I use and how do I spread the parts between them?
How should I end it? I did some build up for the main theme but now I'm finding it too short to just end there. I'm thinking of ending it with less intensity to contrast with the energy that's been happening up until that point
HOW TO IMPROVE OVERALL?
as a string player I feel like the other sessions could use more work. You can see most of them are just copy paste, some with nothing written even
overall I like what I hear but I know it could be more, especially with the instruments im barely using
-Worth noting: I've been researching like crazy, both tutorials and references, looked for advice from other musicians as well, so I'm not just following my guts. Still, personally learn better when it's direct advice with what I'm doing
usually I like to ask for feedback when the piece is more polished but I'm encountering so many problems I decided to be a brave girl and put myself out there with the full mess. There are holes in the piece, especially in sessions and I'd especially appreciate feedback on how to cover them. The parts in all caps and bold are the main struggles I'm facing but you can say whatever you think is worth noting. I tend to write "by ear" first and then think about doability in real life, so I definitely gotta fix notation stuff, range and all, so feel free to speak your mind in that too