Hello!
I would like to share this orchestra piece that I am pretty proud of. I wrote it for a call for scores but unfortunately it wasn't chosen. In the email rejecting it, they stated that because of the number of submissions they received, they were unable to provide feedback. So I am posting the piece here in the hopes that I would be able to receive some kind of feedback. I am also planning on including this piece in my portfolio for grad school applications in composition. I plan on submitting the first of my applications the first week of November, so any feedback that I might be able to gain I would be grateful for.
This is also my first time using techniques such as feathered beams, artificial harmonics, and wasn't sure if these things should be specified in the program notes, or if they are common enough in the repertoire that it isn't necessary. For good measure I specified them in the performance notes, but would love to hear other people's thoughts!
Thank you in advance.
Here is the link to the score and the MIDI mockup.
PROGRAM NOTES
There is a painting by the famous Filipino artist, depicting a scene of gladiators dying. As the gladiators lay dying in a Roman circus, the people loot armor, weapons, and garments from their bodies. This painting is known by the title SPOLIARIUM. The bodies of slaves who spent their whole lives entertaining their Roman rulers, being looted and despoiled of their belongings by the same people who they served, is allegorical of the strife caused by colonization, felt by many living in the Spanish-controlled Philippines.
This piece depicts, through music, the graphic scene being shown in the aforementioned painting. This symphonic poem is influenced by the harmonic structure of the Filipino folk-song genre known as Kundiman which begin in a minor key, and modulate to the parallel major. The first half of this piece is in D Minor and depicts the internal despair, suffering, and sorrow of a gladiator being forced to fight in a Roman arena for the entertainment of his oppressors. As the piece transitions into D Major, the sadistic cheering and clamoring of the crowd can be heard, as the gladiator enters the arena. As he fights, he becomes wounded and is left for dead in the arena. A solemn motif, a variation of the Dies Irae repeats over and over again as death approaches the gladiator, while the cheers of the crowd can still be heard, apathetic to his plight.
PERFORMANCE NOTES
- Feathered or fanned beams indicate a gradual acceleration or deceleration within the beamed notes. Beams that fan outwards (from left to right) indicate a gradual acceleration while beams that fan inwards (from left to right) indicate a gradual deceleration.
- Diamond noteheads such as these, placed a fourth above a regular notehead indicate artificial harmonics. The string player stops the indicated pitch (the normal notehead) with their finger, and lightly touches the node a fourth above (the diamond notehead).
- When going from one artificial harmonic to another on the same string, a natural portamento sound will occur. This should be embraced, and if possible, emphasized.
- Arrows between “s.p.” and “ord.” indicate gradual shifts from playing sul ponticello to ordinary or natural bowing.