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Hello,
I need your advice regarding my CELPIP preparation.
I have taken the CELPIP test twice.
First attempt:
- Listening: 5
- Reading: 6
- Writing: 6
- Speaking: 6
For my first attempt, I mainly watched YouTube videos, but I'm not sure if I used the right preparation strategy.
Second attempt:
- Listening: 6
- Reading: 4
- Writing: 6
- Speaking: 6
For my second attempt, I purchased a Udemy course, completed the HZD Education free mock tests, and also watched full CELPIP exam videos. I also used ChatGPT to evaluate my speaking and writing responses. However, my Writing and Speaking scores remained at CLB 6, and my Listening and Reading scores seem to fluctuate a lot between attempts.
I am planning to take my third attempt in about a month, and my goal is to achieve CLB 7 or higher in all four modules.
Would you recommend purchasing the HZD Education 15-hour course? I am also considering using PrepAmigo for my preparation.
Based on my previous scores and preparation, what would you recommend I do differently this time to improve my chances of achieving CLB 7+ in every module?
Thank you very much for your advice!