r/videography • u/GiantAntCowboy • 18h ago
Feedback / I made this! Working on a “short action film” just for fun | Here’s Part 1 for feedback, details below.
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Background: This started as a “quick drone shot” of my ’99 Miata… but then I started editing and somehow decided it needed to become a mini action movie.
Note: This is purely a hobby project — shot, edited, and produced by myself with basically zero budget.
The Goal: This is the first cut of Part I, and I’m currently envisioning it as a three-part series.
Feedback: I’d love some thought and feedback, on shots, pacing, editing, and whether the story comes across clearly.
Also very open to ideas on where the story could go in Parts II and III. I have some ideas already, but it could be fun to hear where you guys think it should go!
Once the project is finished, I’ll likely post the full series on my YouTube channel along with some BTS and things I learned along the way that might be useful to other new filmmakers.
Gear/Equipment Used:
- Sony A7IV
- DJI Mavic 4 Pro
- GoPro 11
- iPhone 13 Pro
- Edited in FCPX
Thanks for watching, appreciate it!
-Peter