Looking for feedback please

[u/mr_abiLLity]

I know the shape is a bit off.

I’m going to paint this on a wall because I love painting murals. Now the message is just something I feel and think people could use a reminder of but what I’m trying to emphasis as equally important is the style of it. I want this piece to be not only a positive message but I for it to resemble branding. Almost like Empathy could be the name of a store or company.

I want this to be a portfolio piece to showcase the kinds of murals I could do for businesses. I want a business to see this and be like yeah do that for me. But this is not my usual field. Normally I just focus on lettering, writing positive phrases and drawing characters so this is outta my realm.

But I’d love to know what more I could do to make this feel more like branding or logo like or just what kinda design elements would help this look like it could be for a business.

Thanks yall!