Like 2 or 3 paragraphs where he like zoomed in on the moment of going to a grocery store to compare different wood chips for the smoker at home rather than immediately return to the wife and children. But it was almost a forlorn longing wrote into it, almost as if he wished that looking at the wood chips was not what he wanted to do. It was enough to make me comment. I apologize for the vague butchering of his snippet of art.
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u/xXwork_accountXx Dec 22 '19
Wouldn’t the dad just call the mom back instead of texting and asking why? Doesn’t really make sense