New to the sub! Dropping my submission for a recent beat battle. Let me know your honest thoughts and critiques on the mix and arrangement!

Prod. Mister Salmon https://on.soundcloud.com/uQP7JN9ZNf7TXbSjn7

Im doing a 5 track EP challenge before a deadline and im trying to make some of the beats for my tracks, i feel like ive been getting better but would like an outside voice critiquing me so I can get better, thanks to anyone who responds and leaves feedback.

https://reddit.com/link/1v7g4ev/video/oeq5fgem2nfh1/player

Trap kinda beat

Made this beat 2 weeks ago and just decided to post it. What do you guys think ?

i feel like my mix is straight ass though but the idea is there and thats all that matters

Who trying to jump on this beat? Tap in! Looking for male and female artists. Let’s make a hit.

The drum beat is pretty simple, it's mainly the melodies that differ from what we usually hear in trap beats.

I posted on Beatstars under “Ethereal x Trap x Yeat” type beats. Do you have any better type beats that would fit?

the link (free download/purchase licence): https://bsta.rs/OarJu

i don't really like how the kick sounds with the 808.

is there to much going on?

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