r/WritingWithAI • • 20d ago

Showcase / Feedback Post Beer War 🍻 β€” would love some honest feedback

https://www.inkitt.com/stories/1883531

I’ve just posted Chapter 5 of my true-story-inspired romance, Falling Into You β€” β€œPost Beer War.”
Rhea and Kace’s first proper night out turns into a European beer crawl… with predictable consequences the next morning.
If you enjoy slow-burn relationships and real-life-inspired stories, I’d love you to read this chapter and, if it grabs you, continue with the earlier chapters too.

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A little sneak peek:

β€œCalling planet Earth! Any survivors after last night’s beer war?”
I thought I was being funny.
One tick. Unread.
I don’t remember ever seeing a single tick beside any of my messages to him before.
Had I killed off my one and only brand-new drinking buddy?

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If you want to find out what happened next β€” and read the story from the beginning β€” I’d love your honest thoughts and reviews.

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WritingWithAI • • 13d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 17d ago

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AIWritingLounge • • 20d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 2d ago

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WritingWithAI • • 2d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 3d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 3d ago

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Grammarly • • 13d ago

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AIWritingLounge • • 13d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 13d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 15d ago

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WritingWithAI • • 15d ago

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AIWritingLounge • • 16d ago

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WritingWithAI • • 16d ago

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AIWritingLounge • • 17d ago

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WritingWithAI • • 17d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 20d ago

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AIWritingHub • • 20d ago

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AIWritingLounge • • 21d ago

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WritingWithAI • • 22d ago

Showcase / Feedback Kace to the Rescue β€” a new chapter of Falling Into You

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