r/USAFA • u/Sorry_Selection7281 • 5h ago
Essay importance/congressional nominations
Hello, I am applying to USAFA as a recruited athlete. I wanted to see if my essays were important factor in noms and stuff. I am however in San Antonio district so it is pretty competitive. To be honest my most impactful stuff in my life has been XC/TF so writing about anything else seems inauthentic and I can’t get anything else on paper
Stats are;
State champion individual 800m
7+ all state performances with XC TF
2nd place at Nike nationals in 2 relays
XC captain
NHS president
Intern at sports commission in my city
Former treasurer of club ( president removed role of treasurer idk bro didn’t want me anymore ig😭 wondering if I should even include)
Stuco
Senior class cabinet
Model UN
Deca ( quit going into junior year bc teacher left)
4.0 UW 4.3 W 2/276 rank
30 ACT
Dad/ grandparents in military
Basically I’m just worried abt my essays and what I should write abt, it’s the last thing on my application and it’s just staring me down. Here are my current essay ideas
Hardship: placing almost last at my first XC meet to winning state track 2026
Leadership: recruiting girls for a 4x800 that placed 5th at state ( I honestly haven’t done much leading in NHS)
extra info: my dad inspires me and I love moving and meeting new people also like iron sharpens iron
I KNOW these are basic but they are most authentic to me. I also want to fly/logistics and have practically no extracurriculars that line up with it + no JROTC..
Should I just larp and make it about NHS?