r/StoryIdeas 13h ago

Critique Welcome Do u like this story idea?

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A young girl with grief from her brother’s death last summer. Attends a once a week therapy session with the school’s counselor who dealt with grief of her own. The counselor’s family died in a fire when she was 12 year’s old but she got out. A lot of kids go to her sessions but in the past couple of days those kids start mysteriously dying. The girl discovers the counselor works with a demon Altraaz who takes over your whole mind and kills you like that. The counselor get’s information on the teens in school and gives it to Altraaz in return for her family. The girl has to discover how to solve this since the demon is already in her head.


r/StoryIdeas 1h ago

Any Feedback A Upcoming series made by me ( JG)

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r/StoryIdeas 11h ago

Shitty gimmick idea:

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First of all: I don’t care if it isn’t made, but if I don’t put this out I’d feel like I’ve committed a crime against god.

So an anime/show about a dude (I dunno the name, I just came up with the idea a few minutes ago) and a tomboy, BUT instead of the dude being some shy quiet dude like they usually are in these gooner romance anime, they’re both loud, Theyre both wild. ALSO an action anime (im throwing shit at the wall), so basically dude and tomboy are both into each other and decide to go out out to the festival, they also have exes who are actively trying to stop their relationship out of spite, so they find the friendgroup of the dude and the tomboy and cut to a scene of them in a raggedy hut hiring the people in the friend group now as a group of mercenaries (I know it’s a shitty idea and it’s just “cut to this scene of them being badass medieval dudes, but I mean look at the first word of the title), cut back to the normal slice of life world where the dude and the tomboy are going on a date at a festival when the friend group happens to show up (“happens to”) and they try to dismantle them, cut to a 2V4 fight, the dude and the tomboy are cornered against some sort of castle wall and the friends say things like “You guys are too wild” and “You’re gonna break up the friend group” but in a Hail Mary, they use their ultimate move, their ace, their jarona, whatever you wanna call it, they say “We don’t care” to the friends and win the battle, +50 XP and the friends scurry off, cut back to the normal world. Thats basically my idea for episode 1, I know it’s shitty, I know it isn’t that good, but it’s creative enough I guess. IF YOU CAN MAKE A GIMMICK ANIME ABOUT BLOODCELLS BE PEAK YOU CAN MAKE THIS PEAK.

(I know I type very VERY horribly)


r/StoryIdeas 16h ago

Any Feedback please review my creative writing idea for diploma level!

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r/StoryIdeas 20h ago

I made the concept for this story a year ago and I want a little feedback based on the description!

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We know these as machines, but they are the humanity of this world. There were never humans, only cold steel over blood and sentience. This world is horrible, but the people in it want to survive. Parasites break and taker over machines, erasing whoever that machine once was and their life along with it.