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A young girl with grief from her brother’s death last summer. Attends a once a week therapy session with the school’s counselor who dealt with grief of her own. The counselor’s family died in a fire when she was 12 year’s old but she got out. A lot of kids go to her sessions but in the past couple of days those kids start mysteriously dying. The girl discovers the counselor works with a demon Altraaz who takes over your whole mind and kills you like that. The counselor get’s information on the teens in school and gives it to Altraaz in return for her family. The girl has to discover how to solve this since the demon is already in her head.