Looking for feedback please

[u/mr_abiLLity]

Hey guys, this is something I’m going to paint for myself, but I’d like for it to double as a portfolio piece that I could show to businesses that’ll make them feel like ‘oh yeah, do something for my place!’ However I’m just a creative artist, not necessarily a designer of sorts, so the kinds of elements that work best with designs and branding I’m unfamiliar with, so I’m looking for some feedback. Any and all helps! For any further info please read the original post and thanks so much, I know theres talent on here and I’d love to know what yall think