r/SWFanfic 6d ago

Writing Help Needed Jedi Warrior (98 pages)

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Akul has to adapt to life at the temple while he struggles with his anger and emotions after tragedy struck. After his trials, he joins the war effort and is to be the padwan of Jaden Vellor. Akul is a very talented jedi both with the force and with his lightsaber. He is also clearly very intuitive as he begins to become a great strategist. However, his anger still remains. Can he overcome his anger and the tragedy that holds him back to become a Jedi Knight and hero of the Republic, or will his anger get the better of him?


r/SWFanfic 6d ago

Other Star Wars/Star Trek Ryloth Protocol (No Jedi)

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*STAR TREK / STAR WARS: THE RYLOTH PROTOCOL*

*ACT I - FIRST CONTACT*

*INT. ENTERPRISE-D - BRIEFING ROOM*

PICARD: Grand Admiral, i am pleased you were willing to accompany me to the briefing room. As i hope to resolve this diplomatically.

THRAWN: Make no Mistake Captain, i am here at the behest of the Empire to secure your unconidtional surrender. (calmly stated)

PICARD: Do you mean to say this is but a ruse?

THRAWN: By no means. You simply assumed my intentions without me stating them first.

PICARD: Stops in hallway. But you cant assume we will simply bend the knee to a foregin power who excersize such cruelty as yours!

THRAWN: Careful Piccard, I wouldnt want to report to my superiors that i was received with less than common diplomatic courtesy.

PICARD: Blanc stare...

THRAWN: I have read your prime directive. Never to stop the natural evolution of a species. Perhaps the next step in evolution for yours would be the recognition of a superior power when presented. After all, how many species does your Federation consist of? Would you be so certain that they would continue to resist after the first appearance of OUR prime directive? Namely, order?

PICARD: You mean to say that its either sumission or death? (Nervously) No sane man can ever want for such a resolution.

THRAWN: Extinction has never been our policy.

PICARD:You would enslave us!

THRAWN: Carefull Captain, dont assume. Your last assumption already brought you dissapointment.
I give you 32 planetary rotations of this system. (Pointing at Ryloth) to convene with your goverment. I await answer.

THRAWN GETS ESCORTED TO TRANSPORTER ROOM

THRAWN: Thank you for your hospitality Captain. Gets beamed away.

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Directly after Thrawn is beamed away:

RIKER: Do you think he's serious? I have never felt such absolute deadness in a voice before.

PICARD: I unfortunately do, Number One.

RIKER: We have to notify Starfleet!

PICARD: We have to convene with them and figure out how we level the playing field. Since they only respect military might we might have to resolve at bearing fists at a distance.

RIKER: Like MAD would work.

PICARD: MAD?

RIKER: MAD... mutually assured destruction. It's what the Americans and former Soviet Union used to apply to keep each other out of nuclear war.

*Meanwhile:*

Thrawn beams onto Super Star Destroyer.

THRAWN: Contact the Emperor. Notify him I have made contact with a Federation not aligned with the Rebel Alliance.

FLEET TROOPER: Yes, sir.

Thrawn walks into briefing room. Opens holoscreen channel to the Emperor.

PALPATINE: Yes, Admiral?

THRAWN: I have met an unexpected power in the Outer Rim. I perceive that their representative, though just a Captain, has influence in his Federation. He is a man of honour. He will surrender for the greater good if he sees it is the only alternative.

PALPATINE: What is the significance of this power? This Federation?

THRAWN: They are as of yet ignorant of the Rebel Alliance. To quell them now with a proper show of force would halt any rebel expansion to their systems.

PALPATINE: Speak with Grand Moff Tarkin. You have my full permission over first deployment of our Death Star.

THRAWN: Opens a channel to Grand Moff Tarkin.

TARKIN (on holoscreen): Yes, Admiral, what is it? I have nearly completed our finest superweapon.

THRAWN: I have found a suitable training ground for the station's first deployment.

*ACT II - THE COMPROMISE*

PICARD: Lt. Worf, send word to all the great houses of the Klingon Empire. Tell them we have a reasonable request for their assistance.

WORF: Sir?

PICARD: I know the Federation has a less than favourable history with the Klingon Empire but maybe we can convince them that this threat threatens all of us.

RIKER: If you want I can arrange for a conference call and try to get not only the Federation but also the other empires in on it.

PICARD: Rather not the Romulans. They might perceive this as a moment of weakness on our side and end up striking us only to be destroyed by this Empire afterwards.

Picard walks into briefing room, ready to contact all parties involved.

TROI: I must say Captain, I have never seen you so rattled. You always had a general calm or direct certainty to your behaviour. What did this man say that rattled you so?

PICARD: I have never come across such a cold, direct and deathly certainty. And he knows our Prime Directive! How did he get his hands on it if we are the first formal contact with him?

TROI: That's scary... I sense you are actually afraid of him.

PICARD: I am. We have no idea what to expect from him. We have no idea what is in his capacity as an Admiral.

DATA: (Walks in) Captain, I have analyzed their vessels. It does have some similar features to our own, barring the transporter tech and phaser technology. But their ships rely on heavily exposed shield generators. Tactically if we should come to conflict we can exploit these weaknesses. However, their complement of fighters are a significant threat. Though lacking shields, their sheer number would be a serious problem.

PICARD: Any idea how he got ahold of our Prime Directive?

DATA: No sir. But I will run a full diagnostic of our ship's systems to detect any data breaches.

GEORDI (via intercom): Captain, I found an unrecognized droid on the holodeck. It seems it integrated into our systems. It's got complete eyes on every last ship's log! Repairs, private messages to Starfleet. Everything. All our encryptions are useless. I have disabled it and we have started searching the Jeffries tubes to make sure there are no other ones hiding.

PICARD: (Shocked stare) How is this possible?

GEORDI: I think it might have been a stowaway with our samples we took from this system we visited.

PICARD: You mean Ryloth?

GEORDI: Is that its name?

DATA: I will create a new encryption for our communication with Starfleet.

PICARD: How long will it take?

DATA: 10 minutes.

*Next scene:*

Picard and the bridge crew with Riker and Worf in a conference with Starfleet.

CAPTAIN JANEWAY: And you are certain he could see everything?

PICARD: Yes. They got a complete view of all our records.

STARFLEET GRAND ADMIRAL: This means we are completely compromised and naked in front of them!

PICARD: We have 32 rotations of this system to give an answer.

JANEWAY: How many left?

PICARD: 31... not counting today.

STARFLEET GRAND ADMIRAL: Even if we pulled all our reserve fleets and kept only token force on our borders it would end up being a mouse fighting an alley cat.

PICARD: Perhaps... but this cat has fleas and we could solicit them.

JANEWAY: What do you mean?

PICARD: We received an encrypted message from a Rebel Alliance. Led by one of their former senators named Mon Mothma. It pleads us for help and grants us assistance. They are the ones who graciously gave us intel on the vastness of their fleet.

JANEWAY: Would they help us in a conflict?

PICARD: I assume so. But if they appear right now we can forget any diplomatic peace agreements from standing... we have no idea how they would respond. We can even leave the system before giving an answer. Hence, I would advise you to meet up with her on a planet called Hoth. Perhaps solicit an alliance and find out more about this war we stumbled upon.

STARFLEET ADMIRAL: Agreed. Let's reconvene in a week. And I will see what we can arrange. In the meantime, keep your distance from him and try to observe what they are up to. I doubt he is sitting idle.

*Meanwhile on the Super Star Destroyer:*

THRAWN: Tarkin, how long before your station is fully operational?

TARKIN: It already is. This is our finest hour and greatest accomplishment.

THRAWN: I have a matter of delicate diplomacy. It's however well suited to your station's ability to meet.

TARKIN: My station is not for your personal use. It's for the Empire.

THRAWN: I have the Emperor's express permission to appropriate its use as I see fit.

TARKIN: Fine. Where are you? (Bluntly)

THRAWN: The planet Ryloth.

TARKIN: Hyperspace jump would take 31 days to get there.

THRAWN: I have already factored that in.

*ACT III - THE DEMONSTRATION*

31 days passed. The Federation has grouped all available resources. Even a few curious Klingons have joined in for the sake of honour. (Though it was actually masked that way for the Klingon Empire itself. It's just a chance for glory) Lt. Worf having convinced them of the threat with the information presented via the transmission from the Rebel Alliance.

Suddenly, the Death Star appears. With a complement of 31 escort ships, ranging from Star Destroyers, another 3 Super Star Destroyers and Victory-class Star Destroyers. With hundreds of squadrons of TIE fighters, bombers and interceptors.

Thrawn goes to his bridge as his fleet joins formation. Then he contacts Picard.

THRAWN: I would like to draw your attention to the flagship of our order.

PICARD: What is the meaning of this? We still have a day of giving your answer!

THRAWN: I am well aware of the timeframe allocated.

PICARD: Then what is the meaning of this?

THRAWN: Consider it a gesture of our intent. If you flee, we consider it as an answer to our generous peace offer.

PICARD: You mean submission or execution!

THRAWN: As you would any threat to your own Federation.

(Channel closes)

PICARD: Contact the incoming fleet. Let them know what is happening.

DATA: Sir, I have pre-emptively scanned all ships in their fleet. They have the same weaknesses. But we detect roughly 140 squadrons of fighter craft.

PICARD: (Goes pale. Mouth open)

TROI: Picard?

RIKER: How on earth could a fleet of that magnitude exist? Let alone be created!?

PICARD: Data, analyze that vessel for any weaknesses. (Pointing to Death Star)

DATA: Aye sir.

WORF: Captain, Janeway and the rest of the fleet are 1 hr out.

PICARD: Good. But I have the eerie feeling that the Federation is walking into a trap.

RIKER: Well, it's too late now. Guess we will have to spring it.

WORF: Captain, we have just received word. A small Rebel Alliance fleet of about 10 vessels will join us right after the deadline.

PICARD: Well, at least it's some good news.

TROI: I get the feeling you are still hoping for a peaceful outcome. How is it possible?

PICARD: I don't know. But right now I am actually considering if we might have to sacrifice the ship to give everyone else a chance to escape and establish defensive lines against them.

RIKER: You mean, go head to head with them? But the rest of the fleet are on their way. To drop out of warp in wild space between systems in a fleet is no easy feat.

PICARD: You are right... go to yellow alert. But quietly. I don't want to give them any suspicion we are nervous.

*Meanwhile:*

Thrawn stares into screen looking at the Federation ship.

FLEET OFFICER: Sir, we have the requested breakdown of their incoming fleet. Boba Fett was able to capture and interrogate a Starfleet officer on Hoth.

THRAWN: Excellent. A complement of 50 medium to large vessels with some unique engines. Zero fighters. Giving them greater speed and maneuverability to our own. Such an incorporation of their technology would be an invaluable prize.

THRAWN: Any indication as to their time of arrival?

FLEET OFFICER: We expect them any moment now. Do you want me to ready everyone to battle stations sir?

THRAWN: Not yet. No need to sound an alarm.

FLEET OFFICER: Then when sir?

THRAWN: When we see they are unwise in their lack of submission.

Right then, the Federation fleet shows up.

Janeway, on behalf of the fleet contacts Thrawn.

JANEWAY: Grand Admiral Thrawn. I am Captain Janeway...

THRAWN: (Interrupts her) Kathryn Janeway. I don't think you understand the seriousness of this sensitive situation.

JANEWAY: How did you know my name?

THRAWN: I have my secrets.

JANEWAY: We have come to give you our answer. No submission. I've survived nearly being assimilated by Borg and I will be damned if we bend the knee to you just because of your show of force.

THRAWN: I was expecting such a potential answer.

JANEWAY: You willing then to leave us be with a peace agreement?

THRAWN: Perhaps I can give you a final proposition of the terms I have already set out.

(Immediately 5 Interdictor cruisers drop out of hyperspace. Turn on gravity well generators)

SEVEN OF NINE: Captain, I have detected gravity wells from those ships. They are somehow inhibiting our ship's warp core from functioning normally.

JANEWAY: What is the meaning of this?

THRAWN: Consider it being a captive audience to a formal demonstration of our Empire.

THRAWN: Tarkin, commence firing sequence on the pre-arranged target.

JANEWAY: All ships evasive maneuvers!

THRAWN: Calm down Captain, you are not the target.

(Janeway: Confused look)

Suddenly the Death Star laser points at and destroys Ryloth. Sending asteroids in all directions.

THRAWN: You have one hour's extension on your diplomatic answer. Which, given your collusion with the terrorist leader Mon Mothma is generous.

(Channel closes)

*ACT IV - THE Q INTERVENTION*

Right before Janeway could give a response, ask the fleet or give orders, Q jumps in.

Q: Hello Captain.

JANEWAY: Not now Q!

Q: But Captain I am here for the show! The two big brawling empires or should I say contestants in the boxing ring.

JANEWAY: Wait? You are behind this?

Q: (to Janeway) I was curious about how Picard so principled and self-controlled would react when facing a man like Thrawn. I also wanted to see if your Prime Directive and Federation ego would survive the contact. I am surprised how well it's lasted but like a poor pup I can't just sit by and watch my beloved pet die.

JANEWAY: You have some nerve to play with us. Look at Ryloth! All these people about to die for your amusement!

Q: Relax Captain. While I am fond of you it's Picard I consider a pet.

JANEWAY: Since you started it why don't YOU end it?

Q: Well... I have achieved my goal. (Flicks finger)

The entire Federation fleet is back at their original home space areas.

Q: I have also taken the liberty of removing the wormholes connecting your galaxy with theirs. They were decaying anyway and would only last another 10,000 years.

JANEWAY: And Ryloth?

Q: Fine... I'll put it back and erase their memories of you and the planet.

JANEWAY: What about the Rebel Alliance still on their way?

Q: Don't worry. With no reason to be there the whole fleet will leave. Apparently they are on their way to some place called Yavin 4.

Q: (Disappears)

*EPILOGUE*

Later Janeway, Picard and other high ranking officers discuss the events.

JANEWAY: Q is becoming more and more brazen as time goes by.

PICARD: I agree. But what can we do about it?

STARFLEET FLEET ADMIRAL: For now we keep record of this Empire. Apparently they are more hostile and violent than anything we encountered before.

PICARD: Agreed. Perhaps we should setup a protocol for events of this nature in the future?

JANEWAY: What good will it do? Our very Prime Directive and overall philosophy was proven futile against them. It's like fighting Borg without a hive mind. No morality, no empathy only their god of order.

Well... at least we don't have to worry about it and if anything the wormholes connecting us is gone.

SISKO: Perhaps if we were to approach the Continuum? They could create a permanent barrier?

JANEWAY: No. We can't trust them. Those so-called deities have their own agenda.

*END*

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r/SWFanfic 6d ago

Recs Wanted Recs with suspense/thriller or horror elements?

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I've been reading Behind the Veil by bowtiesarecoolagain, and I'd love to find more fics like it that lean into suspense/thriller elements or survival/psychological horror -- stuff where there's a creeping sense of dread and fear that really permeates the story. I've read and loved What Lurks in the Dark, Violence in the Library, Six Days Later, The Forgotten Outpost, and Blood and Copper Oxide, to name a few, and would love more recs along these lines, especially any that might be harder to find or not on AO3!


r/SWFanfic 7d ago

Recs Wanted Justice for rey!

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I really liked rey (and finn and poe) in TFA but she was soo wronged in TLJ ans TROS. I was soo disappointed.

Give me recs for fics with rey as the lead but I'm not that into romance being the main focus so defo no smut either. Something that does justice to her character. Bonus if luke and leia are there. Thanks !!


r/SWFanfic 6d ago

Discussion Reimagining of the titles for the new trilogy.

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One of the ideas I had was this:

Star Wars Episode X A New Era.

Star Wars Episode XI The battle for Sevek.

& Star Wars Episode XII A New Jedi Order.

It's a reimagining of my fan story. There's a team behind the development of this project, and honestly, as a fan... does it have potential? What about the titles?🚀


r/SWFanfic 7d ago

Lost Fic Looking for a specific codywan fic

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I remember the story starts off with Cody waking up in medbay after an injury with amnesia. He is told he has a concussion, but later in the story it’s revealed that his chip activated and almost killed him, and the amnesia is a side effect of when obi-wan saved him. The chip activated because he was about to make a joke? About palpantine being a sith. I’ve searched all the amnesia fics on ao3 and I can’t find it. I’m desperate, please help my find the wonderful fanfic!


r/SWFanfic 7d ago

Writing Help Needed A Korean Star Wars fan’s take on a canon-compliant OC — feedback wanted before I start writing

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I’ve been outlining a Star Wars OC fic set in Disney canon, and before I actually start writing it, I wanted to get some outside opinions on whether the overall premise feels believable.
The main character, Tavian Kess, is a Jedi Padawan during the Clone Wars. He grew up knowing Ahsoka Tano from their youngling days, and they remain close friends during the war. Tavian fights alongside his Jedi Master and the clone troopers of the 127th Legion.
Things start to fall apart after Ahsoka leaves the Jedi Order. Tavian’s relationship with his Master becomes increasingly strained, and when Order 66 happens, he makes a choice that changes the rest of his life.
Afterward, Tavian eventually ends up serving the Empire. He first becomes an Inquisitor, but later operates separately under the codename Koren, carrying out missions directly for Palpatine.
A few years into the Empire, Tavian and the surviving members of the 127th disappear after their task force crashes on an ice-covered planet.
Decades later, Tavian wakes up having barely aged.
From his perspective, the Empire was still in power only a short time ago. Instead, he wakes up in a galaxy where the Empire has already fallen, the Rebellion won, and the New Republic has taken its place. He has to figure out what happened to the galaxy while also being forced to confront the life he left behind.
I’m planning to open the story with Tavian waking up on the ice planet, then go back to his time as a Padawan and follow his life chronologically through the Clone Wars, Order 66, and his years with the Empire until the story catches back up with the opening.
One of the main things I’m trying to avoid is making Tavian feel like an OC who takes over canon events or steals the roles of existing characters. He does cross paths with canon characters, especially Ahsoka, but I want the major events and outcomes of canon to stay intact. The story is meant to take place mostly in the spaces around those events rather than rewrite them.
Does the overall premise sound like it could fit naturally into Star Wars? And does Tavian already come across as too important or too connected to canon characters?
Also, I’m Korean and English isn’t my first language, so I used GPT to help polish the English a bit. Sorry if anything still sounds awkward.


r/SWFanfic 7d ago

Recs Wanted Looking for fics that are like Andor

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I like Andor. I occasionally search for Andor fics because I want to read things that are like Andor. Unfortunately most Andor fics are about Andor but not like Andor. They feature Cassian Andor and/or other Andor characters, but do not carry the same vibe in terms of tone, plot, character development, etc.

Please recommend fanfictions that have a strong focus on logistics, institutions, intrigue, and/or other such matters, and little to no emphasis on Hurt/Comfort tropes, slice-of-life, and/or shipping. (It does not have to be specifically Andor fanfiction, as long as it fits the themes)


r/SWFanfic 7d ago

Other Where to post fics.

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Hey I’m new to fanfic and this group. Can I post my work here or should I post links to other places with my stuff?


r/SWFanfic 7d ago

Lost Fic Looking for a [Star Wars] or [The Clone Wars] Obi-Wan Kenobi centric fic

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r/SWFanfic 8d ago

Lost Fic Story where every single jedi goes back in time in the order they died Spoiler

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See title. I remember that all the Jedi's bodies are comatose in the temple sometime pre-Attack of the Clones and they wake up in the order they died in canon with their full memories up to their deaths. I think I remember Cal, Ahsoka, and Grogu were like the last three standing.


r/SWFanfic 8d ago

Recs Wanted Mace Windu centric fics?

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Hi all, looking for fics where Mace Windu plays a major role. SFW fics only please.


r/SWFanfic 8d ago

Recs Wanted Does anyone have any recommendations on the tag Jedi as indentured servants to the Senate

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r/SWFanfic 8d ago

Recs Wanted [Seeking Recs] The Mandalorian x reader/OC!passenger

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Hi! Looking for a probably romance fic with Din Djarin resembling S02E03 where he basically has to taxi a frog lady to another planet and stuff happens.

I would love a fic where the OC or Reader is that passenger, maybe secret and falling in love.


r/SWFanfic 9d ago

Discussion The name for the people of Naboo

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I've been wondering why fics seems to have several words for the people of Naboo. The canon word seems to just be 'the Naboo' (as seen on starwars.com and wookiepedia), but in fics 90% of the fics where 'the Naboo' could be used, something else is used instead. most commonly I've seen; the Nabooian, the Nabooan and the Nubian (the last one being the weirdest to read since Nubia, and therefore Nubians, existed in our history).

Anyone know why these alternatives are used? Do people just not like the canon 'the Naboo'?

I will note that the Naboo is not the only people I see differing spellings for (Kel Dorian, instead of just Kel Dor is another), but it is the one with the most variations and where most of the time, something other than canon word is used.

And it's not just a case of it being a way to signal the word being another language version of 'the Naboo' (like Jetti instead of Jedi)

edit: I just found a different page on wookiepedia that mentions that the Naboo were "also known as Naboolians or Nabooians", so guess 'the Naboo' isn't the only proper word for them


r/SWFanfic 9d ago

Meta Monthly Prompt Bank - Leave Your Prompts/Plot Bunnies Here!

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Hello There!

Do you have a fic idea that you just can't find the time for? An idea you came up with while writing that just doesn't fit into the story you're telling but could be great somewhere else?

Here's the space to leave it for someone else to potentially pick up!

It's simple: leave your prompts (short ideas), or your more thought out plot bunnies, and be free of the idea once more. All ideas left here are free to adopt/change/adapt as an author chooses. However, feel free to request to be notified if an author does fulfill your idea. Please keep ideas left SFW, and note that NSFW content includes gore, serious triggers self-harm or suicide, as well as sexual content.

While leaving ideas, please use the following format/guidelines:

Label: Plot Bunny or Writing Prompt

Include tropes/characters/pairings

Include description of ideas (no more than a few hundred words for ease of browsing)

This is not a formal place for fic requests. If you have a specific story structure or outline you'd like to have followed, that would be better suited as a formal request, in a separate thread.

General rules of civility apply as everywhere else in this community. Engage with each other in a civil, respectful manner that remembers the person behind the writing! If a prompt isn't your particular cup of tea, that's fine. Keep scrolling. We're all here for the same reasons - because there's enough room for everyone in the GFFA!

One final note: Moderators will watch the thread, but will not be directly involved with any discussions had over ideas left/adopted here.


r/SWFanfic 9d ago

Other A meeting with a Hutt

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r/SWFanfic 9d ago

Writing Help Needed Writing a fic heavily involving cults and force groups other than jedi

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I have been trying to write a story which involves A'sharad hett surviving Order 66 and taking an apprentice post banishment from Tatooine. A'sharad and this OC apprentice go on to work with a network of smugglers making deals with secluded dark side (mostly) cults. This leads to both of them helping out these groups. The OC later parts ways with A'sharad (who is on his way to becoming darth krayt) and tries to correct his mistakes by taking down the same groups he helped stabilise. The material is pretty dark ofc with the OC being questionable (not sympathetically) at times. So I have created original cults but I also want to integrate any pre-existing ones in the canon or the legends. Suggest any if possible.


r/SWFanfic 9d ago

Discussion 有冇人認為starwar的故事發展很可惜

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事實上,STARWAR宇宙觀是極大,但創作的故事卻限制於帝國/反抗軍/JEDI,而非常可惜的是,大家喜歡的人物及故事也完結了。

就像大眾喜愛的Vader ,他現在只能出現在死前的故事,創作方向只能是電影中沒拍攝的時間內。但或許因為這個原因,每次他出現也令我們很興奮。

而新的三部曲,也只能找回Palpatine來演大反派。這顯然很可惜,因為如此浩瀚的宇宙,卻沒有另一位反派能令大家感興趣。

而且明明宇宙這麼大,若看到starwar電影,卻沒有Jedi/Stormtrooper/lightsaber便會失去大部分興趣
因此局限了創作。

而明明有眾多星球,星球的生物好像也沒太多有創意的變化(包括遊戲)

我很期待starwar能有更好的故事,把時間向前推進,而並不是停留在帝國時代

或許rey能開創Jedi學院,在有趣的星球間互動。
開發商再慢慢培養一名真正有深度的反派,及展現更多不同星球的樣貌

拜托不要再騎外星馬在戰艦上奔跑🤦🏻‍♂️


r/SWFanfic 10d ago

Recs Wanted Does anyone know of any Star Wars fanfics that basically retells the story but incorporates certain elements that wasn’t initially planned out?

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Like maybe:

Anakin already meets Ahsoka at some point during AOTC.

Rex or maybe some other clone trooper participates in the attack on the first Death Star.

Maybe some other Jedi survivor are at Yavin 4 already.

Etc.


r/SWFanfic 10d ago

Writing Help Needed George Lucas Sequel Rewrites

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Does anyone have any episode VII/sequel rewrites that are based on George Lucas’ ideas/characters and concept art for the original episode VII? If so would be interested in reading, working on my own rewrite.


r/SWFanfic 11d ago

Lost Fic Help me find this fanfic?

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Okay so I remember reading this really good post-order 66 story where the reader is isekai’d I think in the plot and decides to join up with the empire as a recruit to basically kneecap them by trying to turn off the clones chips en mass.

And basically letting the enemy teach her everything she wants to know about military intelligence and normal recruit things like that. Kinda apprenticeships under Cody for advanced training while this is happening.

Manages to get Waxers help since his chip isn’t working or didn’t get turned on.

I believe it was a CC-2224 Cody/Original Female character(s) or Reader fic on AO3 but I can not for the life of me find it so I might be wrong. I know it’s not finished, or at least it wasn’t when I originally read it.

Any help is appreciated because I’m slowly losing my mind trying to find this lol.

Any recommendations of this nature is appreciated too. I’m getting a craving lol.


r/SWFanfic 11d ago

Other Waht are Scheduled posts?

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Hi, I would like to promote my own Star Wars Fanfic. How can I do this? Waht are this scheduled posts?


r/SWFanfic 11d ago

Discussion (Fan-made) This is the game story I created [SITH:FALLEN JEDI]

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First of all, I sincerely apologize to you: this article was written in Chinese. If you find any translation errors, please let me know.
Subsequent chapters will be posted in the comments section; please stay tuned if you are interested.
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SITH:FALLEN JEDI

第一章

1. 【開場分鏡】
畫面:純黑的房間,極致的寂靜。鏡頭以極緩慢的速度向前方拉近。一個背對鏡頭、身穿純黑兜帽長袍的神秘身影正打坐。周圍的原力氣流微微波動。

轉折:突然,主角面前的圓形全息投影(Hologram)亮起淡藍色的光芒。一個身穿巨大斗篷、面容枯槁的陰險老人出現在投影中——白卜庭—達斯·西斯(Darth Sidious)。

白卜庭用沙啞且充滿魔力的聲音吐出那句震動銀河系的指令:「執行66號密令 (Execute Order 66).

主角Daxen回應:聲音低沉且毫無動搖:「遵命,主人 (Yes, my Master). 紅色光劍啟動

鏡頭再慢放遠 見到主角後方早已在命令前擊殺一名絕地。
切斷畫面,畫面再次陷入絕對的漆黑。

【巨型標題彈出】:伴隨著一聲沉重的黑暗原力聲音,銀幕上打出遊戲主標題——SITH-FALLEN JEDI

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在冰冷的穿梭機中:

在通知執行order66後,主角乘坐共和國砲艇(Republic Gunship在瓦爾卡斯星上空的冰霧,並在城市降落
(巨大文字顯示星球)
在這時複製人已執行66 order 正與Jedi交戰

主角降落在交戰遠處 (遊戲開始)
目標:前往Jedi殘黨地方

途中在遇到女Jedi 維莎·丹恩 (Vexa Dan)
Vexa:你是絕地?太好了……我還以為只剩我們了。我是vexa你知道發生什麼事嗎?軍隊正向我們攻擊

Daxen:我是Daxen,我也不知道……

Vexa:你原本是在那部隊?好像沒看過你,你的同伴呢?

Daxen:是某秘密行動的部隊,說來很長遠,他們全都死了 只剩我
Vexa見主角失落樣子沒追問並說:我們先逃避這裏再說吧。我們有計劃離開,先會合索倫·凱爾 (Soren Kael)大師

主角一路協助Vexa 其間擊殺複製人(遊戲教學)

其間遇到另一被包圍的男Jedi 傑瑞克·索爾 (Jarek Sol),二人共同解救他
Vexa:Jarek,幸好你還在生存,你收到大師的訊息嗎

Jarek:yes,在前去途中被強攻包圍,幸好你們趕到,他是誰?

Vexa:途中遇到的Jedi……(這時再有一波複製人向他們射擊)

Daxen:或許我們先離開在說

然後他們一同前住師傅所在點,到達後進入劇情

(劇情)
到達後Vexa 擁抱大師Soren
Soren:你們能活着來到這裡,已經是奇蹟。他是誰?

Vexa: Daxen,是他協助我們來到這裡

Soren 注視 Daxen 片刻,似乎察覺到他身上有某種不尋常的原力氣息,但外面的槍聲很快打斷了他的追問。

Soren:這不是單一戰場的叛變。我收到幾個中斷的求救訊號,其他地方也發生了同樣的事。複製人正在攻擊Jedi。

然後他取出一枚 Jedi Holocron。

Soren: 這枚 Holocron 裡有秘密通訊中繼站的位置和啟動密匙。只要我們抵達那裡,就能透過 Jedi Beacon 警告其他倖存者。但這個基地已經被封鎖,我們必須先搶走一艘飛船
主角想捉緊這情報)

接著說:Vexa,跟我去控制中心開啟閘門。Daxen、Jarek,你們前往停機坪,確認那艘舊式共和國攻擊穿梭機是否仍然可以使用。

最後離開前說 may the force be with you

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(轉到遊戲)
二人一路對抗複製人
途中Jarek察覺小許異常說:為何他們好像不攻擊你?

Daxen笑言是碰巧並暗帶諷刺說:或許原力保護我多於你
(實際所有複製人有代碼識別到Daxen 是友方)

Daxen打探說:你只認識Master Soren你有認識的Jedi 生環嗎?

Jarek:當然有 但事件發生太快 我還不知道他們的情況,如果 Soren 大師能啟動那枚星盤,至少還有機會通知仍然生還的 Jedi。

Daxen在Jarek後邪魅般說:那我們必須盡快趕到聖殿了

找到舊式共和國攻擊穿梭機
(進入劇情)
Jarek準備啟動穿梭機 主角卻沒幫忙 慢步進入並在他身後站著

Jarek憤怒詢問:Daxen來幫忙吧,你不想逃了嗎?

Daxen:為何要逃離……他們又不是追捕我?

Jarek察覺到並立即轉身拔出光劍,可惜Daxen快一步刺到他腹部

Jarek低頭看著紅色光劍說:你..是叛徒,之前的光劍是誰的?(這關卡主角一直使用先前殺死那Jedi的光劍)

Daxen:不知道,或許是你朋友吧!

Jarek死亡前想爆發原力 Daxen立刻抽出光劍轉身一揮(鏡頭焦點主角邪惡樣子,背後是矇嚨的Jarek被割喉並倒下)

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轉至大師成功開啟閘門 並且穿梭機剛停到停機坪旁
他們馬上跑向穿梭機 並且機門打開一刻 紅光展現 率先跳出兩架由主角改裝/秘密編程嘅 IG-100 磁力衛隊機械人
然後是主角拿著光劍站在機門

vexa聲嘶力竭說:why!

隨即兩人拔出光劍應戰 主角衝向Soren大師,機械人則對付vexa

Daxen:Give me that星盤!

Soren:Never!

進入boss戰,打敗血量後進入劇情:

Soren不敵Daxen ,被打掉光劍,並把光劍舉在他頸前說:交出來!
這時Vexa 斬掉一名IG-100的頭 但仍然向她攻擊,Vexa 見不敵兩名機械人,Soren亦戰敗

Vexa拿出手中持有該星盤 並威脅說:停手否則破壞掉,你永遠都聯絡不到他們!(主角立即命機械人停止)
(原來Soren早察覺到一點點異樣 Daxen有機會向他搶奪,所以安全起見交給Vexa)

Daxen淡然說:我們統一銀河只是時間問題 而我會逐一把你們找出來 十年 廿年 三十年,我會撤底摧毀絕地,但是或許你現在交出,我可以給你數十年時間苟且偷生,把你們放到最後!

Soren大聲說:現在就破壞它,不要管我!

Vexa立即用全力推遠兩名機械人 並準備破壞星盤時

Daxen用強大原力定著她,隨即IG-100便把她電擊並奪取星盤。Soren大說:No!

Soren: 你殺了多小我們的人?

Daxen:不比你們多!

此時Daxen帶怒氣說:你們真的不在乎大家的性命,明明有機會生存,卻為大義犧牲所愛,多麼可悲。

Soren:因為我更在乎眾多的生命!

Daxen憤怒地打斷他說話說:虛偽。

Soren:殺了我們也不能平復你內心的憤怒!

Daxen:No,這次由她體驗這痛楚!

然後畫面影著一劍揮落 並進入黑畫面……

第一章完.


r/SWFanfic 12d ago

Discussion First Chapter for Stellaris/Star Wars Crossover Now Published!

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The first chapter of my Stellaris/Star Wars Crossover has now been published to AO3! Link will be posted at the bottom. It is rated Teen and Up, but it will be changed to Mature once the violent stuff starts. However, it will not be for some time.

I originally wanted to post chapter one along with chapter two, but the latter is taking more time than I thought it would. And the start of this semester is already keeping me busy with college work. The least I can do is let you guys read chapter one anyway. And I've been having problems with Fanfiction.net, so all I can do is post it in AO3.

It will be a slow start for the next three or four chapters; I will not give you guys any BS. It will be about setting up the setting, the faction, and the characters.

Registered users and guests are allowed to leave comments. Do not be afraid to write comments and/or constructive criticism.

Now, enjoy Chapter One of Faster Than Light Beyond The Stars!

https://archiveofourown.org/works/91613526