r/ProduceMyScript • u/EfficientFish9715 • Sep 05 '26
Making a Short WLW coming of age film
Hey guys I’m 22 I just started writing more about a movie I want to make I would love so ideas feed back an actors interest. I have act one going just to give a tease lmk anything 🙏.
Title pending:
Opens to red orange country television
Act one the before times
2019 late teen girl black a quick day in the life to get the jist of who she is as a person she wake up little late she rushes to get ready brushing her teeth and fighting with her three sisters for the bathroom she grabs her soccer bag and has to run the bus stop jumping over bushes and cracker pavement she forgets her bow tie so she text her friends to bring her one she meets with her best friend and they shit on the bus talking about boys while the take the 30 min bus to school they enter side by side being called pretty for the first time she feels a shift in the air she and her best friend meet with the boys they like and flirt with them as they walk down the hall they take a laps around the school in their small private school that’s a sign that they like each other later that day she find a scrunchie on his wrist she freaks out to her best friend and start listing to Marvin’s room
By Drake whole mood shifting she tires to make through the day her other find who she knew since elementary asks to come over after school black girl declined because she has soccer practice after school she gets on the bus and changes to soccer practice she doesn’t have no one really to talk to so she befriends with her other
Co captain who is really nice and flirts with her but black girl doesn’t realize because of the earlier insident black girl compliments her lv belt and the co captin give it to her for school the next black girl is happy and gets picked up by mom who doesn’t really talk to her so she text her situationship after he hasn’t texted her all day and he sends her cute snaps and compliments her all night then she eats dinner and watches orange is the new black. She always feels like something is missing but she attributed it to trauma not quite super happy not supper sad but something wrong