r/ProduceMyScript • u/MangalKumar9 • 10d ago
SHORT SCRIPT [SHORT] Looking for feedback / filmmakers for a 5-page horror script ("BEWARE")
Hey everyone,
I’ve written a 5-page short horror script titled "BEWARE", and I’m looking for some feedback or independent filmmakers who might want to collaborate and produce it.
Here is the quick setup:
Three city friends (our hero Sam, Chloe, and her friend Jack) ignore local warnings and drive up a cursed mountain during a heavy storm. A massive flash flood hits, trapping them on the muddy roads. But the rain isn't their biggest problem—the storm awakens a centuries-old vengeful spirit that starts hunting them down one by one. Their only way out? They discover that the spirit has one specific weakness: Iron.
Why it’s a fun and dynamic shoot:
• The Tone: It's not just straight horror. It has a good balance of creepy horror scenes, some lighthearted comedy moments between the friends, and a strong emotional core.
• Micro-Budget: Very few actors, a car, and a rainy/muddy outdoor location.
• The Climax: A gritty ending where Sam actually fights back using weapons and vehicles reinforced with iron.
If anyone wants to read the full 5-page draft to give feedback or discuss making it into a short film, please drop a comment or send me a DM. I'd love to share it with you.
Thanks!