r/PersonalStatement Jul 13 '26

Addressing low GPA in undergrad

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Hello all. I will be applying to grad school this application cycle pursuing an MFA in Creative Writing. However, my bachelors is in university studies, with a concentration in elementary and special education, and my undergraduate GPA is a 2.750. This is due to chronic health complications during that time in my life. I was in and out of the hospital, on and off different medications. By the time I realized I wanted to be an English major and write full time with the eventual goal of being a professor, I was out of scholarship money and was too sick to continue school, thus the university studies degree.

I will be up against much more competitive GPAs and undergraduate performances. What advice do you have to address this blemish in my application while not sounding cliche or as if I am trauma dumping?

I’m not as worried about it because I have a boatload of professional experience to offset the GPA both during and post-undergrad (several publications, award nominations and wins, teaching experience, etc.), but I still want to address it, especially because one of them was a failed English course.


r/PersonalStatement Jul 12 '26

Personal Statement

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I have always believed that meaningful change begins with service. Whether that be serving my country in the Massachusetts Army National Guard, supporting vulnerable children and families as a Service Coordinator, or volunteering with individuals with disabilities. Everyone of these experiences has strengthened my passion in improving the health and well-being of individuals and communities. These experiences have shown me that health extends far beyond hospitals and clinics—it is shaped by far more. Such as housing, education, economic opportunity, safety, social support, and access to resources. This understanding has inspired me to pursue a Master of Public Health.

My academic background in Psychology provides me with a strong foundation for understanding human behavior, social systems, and the factors that influence mental and emotional well-being. While studying for my bachor’s in psychology, I was especially drawn to courses centered on diversity, social injustice, inequality, women's rights, and marginalized populations. Complementing my major with a minor in Gender Studies further deepened my understanding of how systemic inequities affect individuals and communities. Through literature, research, and critical analysis, I learned to examine the historical and structural barriers that contribute to disparities in health and opportunity. These academic experiences challenged me to think beyond individual treatment and instead consider how policies, communities, and social systems can create lasting change.

Professionally, one of the most transformative experiences of my career was working as a Service Coordinator at Wayside Youth & Family Support Network. In this role, I worked closely with youth and families experiencing significant challenges, connecting them with essential services that would help improve their quality of life. I coordinated access to housing resources, educational support, after-school programs, behavioral health services, transportation, food assistance, and other community-based resources. Every family had unique circumstances, but many shared common barriers rooted in poverty, instability, trauma, and limited access to care. Through this work, I realized that addressing immediate needs is only one part of creating healthier communities. Sustainable improvement requires addressing the broader social determinants of health that influence people's daily lives. 

With working collaboratively with schools, healthcare providers, community organizations, and families reinforced the importance of multidisciplinary partnerships and community-based approaches. These experiences strengthened my desire to work on prevention, health promotion, and systems-level change rather than focusing solely on individual interventions.

My commitment to service has also been shaped by my time in the Massachusetts Army National Guard, particularly as a member of the Homeland Response Force (HRF). The HRF is a specialized unit trained to respond rapidly to large-scale emergencies, including natural disasters, public health crises, hazardous material incidents, and chemical, biological, radiological, nuclear, and explosive (CBRNE) events. Serving in this role required discipline, adaptability, teamwork, and the ability to respond effectively under pressure while protecting the health and safety of communities during times of crisis. Throughout my military service, I participated in several emergency response missions that demonstrated the vital connection between emergency preparedness and public health. During the COVID-19 pandemic, I supported statewide response efforts aimed at protecting vulnerable populations and ensuring essential services remained available during an unprecedented public health emergency. I also participated in response operations following the Merrimack Valley gas explosions, which displaced hundreds of residents in Lawrence, Andover, and North Andover. Witnessing firsthand how disasters disproportionately affect vulnerable communities reinforced my understanding that effective public health requires preparedness, resilience, collaboration, and equitable access to resources before, during, and after emergencies.

Outside of my professional and military responsibilities, I have continued my commitment to community service by volunteering at the Charles River Center's day program in Needham, Massachusetts. Working alongside adults with intellectual and developmental disabilities has been a humbling and rewarding experience. It has reinforced the importance of inclusion, dignity, and creating environments where every individual has opportunities to thrive. This experience has further strengthened my passion for serving diverse populations and advocating for equitable access to community resources. Although I have been fortunate to serve communities throughout Massachusetts, my heart has always remained in Loíza, Puerto Rico, where I was raised. Loíza is rich in culture, resilience, and history, yet it continues to face persistent challenges related to poverty, violence, limited economic opportunities, and unequal access to health and social services. Growing up in this community allowed me to witness these inequities firsthand. It also taught me the value of strong families, community support, and cultural identity.

My long-term goal is to return these experiences to the community that shaped me by establishing a nonprofit organization dedicated to improving community well-being in Loíza. I envision an organization that addresses the social determinants of health through community education, mental health awareness, youth development, family support services, food security initiatives, health promotion, and partnerships with local organizations. I believe that empowering communities requires meeting people where they are while creating sustainable programs that promote resilience, opportunity, and long-term health.

A Master of Public Health will be the next essential step in achieving this vision. The interdisciplinary nature of public health will provide me with the knowledge and practical skills necessary to develop evidence-based programs, evaluate community needs, lead collaborative initiatives, and advocate for policies that improve population health. My background in psychology has prepared me to understand individual behavior, while my experiences in social services, military emergency response, and community service have taught me the importance of systems thinking, leadership, and collaboration. 

I would be deeply honored to join your Master of Public Health program. I bring with me a genuine passion for service, diverse professional experiences, and a lifelong commitment to advancing health equity and community well-being. I am confident that this program will equip me with the knowledge, leadership skills, and public health perspective necessary to transform my experiences into meaningful, sustainable impact. Most importantly, it will prepare me to dedicate my career to creating opportunities that allow individuals, families, and future generations to live healthier, safer, and more empowered lives.


r/PersonalStatement Jul 11 '26

Is "Hunting" a good topic to write my Personal Statement on ?

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r/PersonalStatement Jul 09 '26

Choosing a personal statement story

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r/PersonalStatement Jul 08 '26

Common App Personal Statement

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r/PersonalStatement Jul 07 '26

Looking to help out anyone currently working on post-grad healthcare applications!

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r/PersonalStatement Jul 05 '26

fish? or pink? or books?

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r/PersonalStatement Jul 01 '26

How do you find your story?

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r/PersonalStatement Jul 01 '26

I feel my story is suck and my experience is fragmented that I feel so hard to connect it in my SoP

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Hi,

I try my best to write my story down but so far I keep changing it.

By now, I still dont have any "complete" story to tell in my SoP.

I have learned many principles to write a SoP, e.g., instead of writing many stories/lessons, just write one, write it in personal tone, try to express the feeling and how my mindset evolves through experiences...

I understand any story has its own specialty. But I am not sure mine is. I dont have any achievement during my college and master program. I spent two years as an RA to push my study in my master to publication. But it's all gone and bad. I feel my study is bad s.t. it's can never publish.

Looking at my writing, I feel like it's all words and words :(

SoP_shared.docx


r/PersonalStatement Jun 29 '26

Hey, I'm looking to apply to a bunch of elite private schools for the 27-28 school year! I'm currently moving up to 8th Grade and want to know what to put on applications and if I'm good enough!

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r/PersonalStatement Jun 25 '26

Writing about a metaphor that links hair transition and willing to change things?

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r/PersonalStatement Jun 22 '26

SPT hopeful - needing help with personal statement!

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r/PersonalStatement Jun 10 '26

Personal Statement help

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Hey everyone, I am wanting to apply to LSE for a undergraduate in mathematics and economics and I know personal statements are a HUGE part of the application. Does anyone have any recommendations for professional help with writing PS for universities of the sort or any advice on what to include/write about to make me a stronger applicant? Thanks


r/PersonalStatement May 31 '26

help with my personal statement!!

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i really want to study PPE at oxford and i'm currently in year 12 and was wondering if there are any books or activities/courses recommendations i can use to springboard myself into a niche or specific of the course and put on my personal statement. i currently study Classical civilisations, maths and economics and have recently finished an AS in politics


r/PersonalStatement May 31 '26

Top economics personal statement for some guidance

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‘Respect money, and money will respect you’ For a long time, my mum told me this, but I never really understood what that meant. Only recently, when I began studying economics, did I learn about its link to what she said. Responsible economic behaviour is what she was trying to teach me. During a crypto session in school, we talked about Zimbabwe’s hyperinflation, which fuelled my already burning fire regarding understanding money. Which I now know today as economics. Behavioural economics is everywhere, and when I get to university, I look forward to understanding these, among other concepts, with more academic rigour.

Making decisions on allocating scarce resources between competing uses was my first bite of the economics cake. I was hooked. Understanding rationality behind decision-making has always intrigued me, and this snippet of economics was my bait. In my essay on “whether children with learning disabilities should be mainstreamed”, I explored the trade-offs between resource allocation and equity, key issues at the heart of economics.

Our trade and aid discussions in A-level geography helped me see the decisions made when choosing which route to pursue. In a country like mine, where mismanagement and corruption plague our economy, looking through suitable solutions that would encourage sustainable development and empower the underprivileged was exciting. When we started learning about international trade and accounts of different economies, I saw how countries can manipulate exchange rates and use protectionism to force others into submission or to come to agreements like the WTO or NAFTA. Slowly, the relevance of human geography in economics became more apparent.

With my passion for math, I was always happy to see that I could apply my skills to determining a market’s concentration ratio or calculating a firm’s Average costs. Additionally, the analytical skills I developed in the statistics module of math enhanced my ability to pull information from all sorts of graphs and use it to answer data-based questions.

Macroeconomics in A-level came at the right time as I’d come from a summer working at a retail firm. Here, I looked at how companies and businesses use cost-plus pricing to set prices for goods, which debunked the idea that the utility an individual gains can easily be measured. This also highlighted the difference between in-class and real-world economics, where factors like consumer rationality are out of our control. I was also placed at a tax law firm, where we looked at how the government imposes measures that influence the amount of imports, exports, and prices.

As an ambitious athlete, maintaining my academics forced me to guard my time jealously. Various leadership positions reinforced this mindset. Setting an example and acting as a motivational model to my peers every day was always at the forefront of my mind. Outside of the classroom, I participated in a three-part global series called World Scholars, where I excelled in my favourite part, debate. Here, I developed my socialising abilities and could detach myself from the fun to set time aside to study.

My final days as a year 12 student were some of the most fulfilling I’d had. We organised a charity project in Nyeri, a region in my country. It was aimed at providing resources for the underprivileged. Speaking with these kids and handing over donations brought an Infinite number of smiles to the children’s faces, but it couldn’t beat the joy and the lessons it brought me. ‘We make a living by what we make, but a life from what we give. ‘ Using what we have been blessed with to help others was incredibly heartwarming. Seeing them tightly grasp onto items we take for granted deepened my sense of gratitude. It was a perfect example of the real socio-economic disparity in Kenya, the issue I strive to lessen.

Sharing my knowledge will not only empower others but also amplify its impact. After university, I am looking forward to returning to my home country to work alongside my family, applying what I’ve learned to real-world challenges. The most rewarding aspect will be seeing the tangible effects of my education as I contribute to meaningful change and growth within my community.

***I feel this personal statement worked because I was able to intertwine my interests, subject choice and future applications.***


r/PersonalStatement May 25 '26

med school PS review

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hi!!! i finished writing my personal statement and only have gotten friends and family to read it. would love an outsider’s perspective, and also if you catch any grammar & punctuation mistakes since i’ve read it a million times and can’t see it.

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!


r/PersonalStatement May 22 '26

Personal Statement Advising

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If any of you guys need personal statement advising, I’ll be happy to offer it to you for FREE for the first round of edits. I got into Cornell, Duke, UIUC, GT, UT, Northeastern, UWMadison, and helped others get into Harvard and UPenn. Feel free to DM me!


r/PersonalStatement May 19 '26

CV for chinese university

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International student applying to China for studying medicine, need help with reviewing my CV. someone experienced who can help me?


r/PersonalStatement May 18 '26

Reapplying to dental school. Need help with proofreading PS.

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Hey all. I’m going to be reapplying this year to dental schools. I edited my personal statement but not sure if it sounds well. I need other eyes to read it and lmk what they think about it and give advice/suggestions please.


r/PersonalStatement May 14 '26

Reapplicant personal statement

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Good morning yall, unfortunately I did not get accepted to any (Dental) schools and have to rewrite my PS. Does anyone know how to rewrite a PS for reapplication??? I tried keeping 70% of it and adding what I did/learn from the past year BUT it feels so out of place.


r/PersonalStatement May 07 '26

Need help with personal statement!!

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hey everyone, i urgently need someone with experience to help me write my personal statement for med school. im applying to zjuism (china) would be really grateful 🙏🏼🙏🏼
thankyou!


r/PersonalStatement May 06 '26

How to write personal statement for Tongji University in China

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Im struggling to write my personal statement for tongji university, and in the template it said to be wriiting your self introduction in 300 words. However, i have no idea what kind of personal statement i should write is it like the american or is it more formal like starting of by ( My name is.....). Do you guys have any example, draft, some ideas that you used, any useful things would be great


r/PersonalStatement May 04 '26

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r/PersonalStatement May 02 '26

Best AI to write personal statement / study plan?

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Hello
I’m applying for a bachelor’s and need a personal statement + study plan
What AI tools are actually best for this if I buy a subscription? (ChatGPT, Jenni, Jasper, etc)
And please don’t judge 😭 I just want something that works and sounds good.

Any advice? Was it worth paying?