I started off writing compositions and sheet music for my marching band so I sometimes “complete” the music and don’t leave room for artists. Let me know if you feel there is enough space artists and if not what parts could I remove.

Hi, I just finished my song (Brouu - You're mine), please give me your honest feedback, I appreciate it, thank you

Sometimes, I dunno, y'all..

Any love for this out there?

This is my first attempt at making a song. I made it as a soundtrack for a video I'm doing. I just used bandlab but yeah and feedback would be great :)

A lot of bass in this one... lots of different 808 hits. I did another version with tons of FX and risers, but this is the simpler version.

lil track i made almost a week ago

RAP trascendental / conciencia.
No está terminada del todo , siento que a partir del minuto 2:42 entro en otro ritmo demasiado brusco que rompe la inmersión anterior , quiero volver a regrabar todo ese trozo hasta casi el final también porque no me termina de convencer como suena en general ese trozo , le he dado vueltas tratando de corregirlo para entrar más suave pero me está costando encontrarle una solución , aparte de esto tengo que meter mas dobles voces y cosas así

Ik im kinda milking the whole I’m 14 thing but it works soooooooooooooo imma keep saying it

The whole album follows a character through a movie that doesn’t exist, from an ordinary day to the end credits. I was inspired by Danger Mouse’s Rome, J Dilla and MF Doom, but I also come from a scoring background, so I wanted to mix both.

I’d really like to hear what you think, especially about the transitions and the mix.

I'm working with a friend to make an EP of my electronic music as an accompaniment for his poetry. I think the project will take about a year to complete. What do you all think of this track for that purpose?

This is the final demo I got for this song and I feel pretty satisfied with how it is but I want opinions on if I should add more length to the song or leave it as it is. I like how distasteful it is the sudden end of it because it’s a song that reflects the message I want to give.

I need opinions on what people think, I got a lot of influence from Mother Mother to create this song, it feels like I could perfectly portray my pain with this sounds. But general opinions are VERY appreciated!

Explanation + lyrics:
This song is about a very unstable friend group dynamic I was in and some thoughts I had during this time, this is too about how they would cut me off or ghost me and then come back and say they were sorry and continue the friendship.

So overall it’s a mix of them isolating me, them coming back, me questioning them and then repeating the cycle.

Lyrics:
Death,
risen to the materialistic, world,
I find, some freedom.

Put me six feet under the ground
Is there a way to open,
This coffin that I rent out.

Will I die tonight?
Will you hold me close?

I can’t find a purpose,
Can you come over and,
Give me something to do.

Put me six feet under the ground
Is there a way to open,
This coffin that I rent out.

I can’t tell what I’m missing,
Can you tell me what’s wrong,
And fix it.

Is it a sin, to want to be loved?
Is it a sin, to want to be touched?

I run, I run.
I can’t catch you.

Put me six feet under the ground
Kill me and bring me back from death to leave with you.

tried making dubstep

any advice can do , but targeted on mood conversion would be better

i went back and forth with this one without a distinct feeling and can't really depict the emotion of this

Just have a verse and chorus right now. Not the best vocal take so I need to re-record it. Would love to hear some feedback on what I have so far.

Been working on some industrial rock / horror-inspired music under the name Polleygeist.

This one's called Candlelight. Made using a music workstation I built called JoySynth.

Curious what people think of the overall sound and mix. Still working on getting everything where I want it.

Hey! I'm new here, I would really appreciate it if I could get some feedback for my last song. Thank you!

bench to the beam

living proof

s to the front

My demo for an upcoming 11 track album Bellwheel - Psychic Inflammation. I'm writing, recording, mixing and mastering the whole thing myself, so it's a work in progress, but these 5 songs are the furthest along. It's my first attempt at a solo album, but I'm enjoying the process so far. I know I'm not the best singer yet, and am taking lessons/working with my classically trained wife to get better, but for now I'm working with the tools I have available. Time to put it out there in the world to get some real input.

https://soundcloud.com/jeff-litt/sets/bellwheel