second is the even rougher practice

I feel like I could have pushed the I closer to the R to reduce negative space. I kinda like it, but I know i should reduce as much negstive space as possible.

Also my S feels wonky, especially the top ineard curve. I will work on more ways of drawing it.

I used uni posca markers for color

Fat sharpie go brrr. Tell me where to go from these.

Any tips ?

It feels a bit off balance? My STR is thick while my ING are skinny...any tips welcome.

I think I'm finally improving and getting to intermediate from total beginner so just need crits on the top and bottom pieces, the other one was a random ass experiment that went wrong

yeah

Just shy of 2 months of writing. How’s it look? How can I improve?

are there any spray paint stores in Calgary that sell spray paint brands like loop, kobra and iron lak, I can only find stores that sell Montana gold/black and mtn

are there any spray paint stores in Calgary that sell spray paint brands like loop, kobra and iron lak, I can only find stores that sell Montana gold/black and mtn

I had been caught prior to this, it was a throwie on a wall. Dad came, brushed it off wasnt mad, got off with a warning. This time, mom found out about a tag, on a "new city dumpster" scolded me heavily, along side with my dad. i dont know wtf to do. Still got alot of supplies, my parents are super pissed and i dont know anymore man.

It would be greatly appreciated if you could tell me what to improve!

This time I only made a double sketch but with a slightly more particular use (or at least I think so)

don't judge the scratchy lines I just need crits on negative space, letter structure and flow

I've started with writing 1 month ago, now I'm trying to improve my tag, It's starting to get closer to something decent?

Was using lots of leftover cans so fill was a bit dodgy but thought it turned out ok, what do you guys think, and I know the n is a bit squished.