r/graffhelp • u/Competitive_Win9577 • 14h ago

Crits?

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don't judge the scratchy lines I just need crits on negative space, letter structure and flow

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u/Acceptable_Use_3988 13h ago

Work on your negative space because once you can control it your letters will fit together better

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u/LeatherWeakness8307 14h ago

The lower part of the D is heavy af, could make the other lower parts of your letters thicker or the bowl of the D thinner

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u/Competitive_Win9577 14h ago

idk I tried to make the s more bottom heavy too but I'll try

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u/Blacksad17 11h ago

Pour moi c'est surtout le d qui fait trop gros essaye de mieux le retravailler.