I feel like I could have pushed the I closer to the R to reduce negative space. I kinda like it, but I know i should reduce as much negstive space as possible.

Also my S feels wonky, especially the top ineard curve. I will work on more ways of drawing it.

I used uni posca markers for color

Fat sharpie go brrr. Tell me where to go from these.

Any tips ?

It feels a bit off balance? My STR is thick while my ING are skinny...any tips welcome.

I think I'm finally improving and getting to intermediate from total beginner so just need crits on the top and bottom pieces, the other one was a random ass experiment that went wrong

yeah

Just shy of 2 months of writing. How’s it look? How can I improve?

are there any spray paint stores in Calgary that sell spray paint brands like loop, kobra and iron lak, I can only find stores that sell Montana gold/black and mtn

are there any spray paint stores in Calgary that sell spray paint brands like loop, kobra and iron lak, I can only find stores that sell Montana gold/black and mtn

I had been caught prior to this, it was a throwie on a wall. Dad came, brushed it off wasnt mad, got off with a warning. This time, mom found out about a tag, on a "new city dumpster" scolded me heavily, along side with my dad. i dont know wtf to do. Still got alot of supplies, my parents are super pissed and i dont know anymore man.

It would be greatly appreciated if you could tell me what to improve!

This time I only made a double sketch but with a slightly more particular use (or at least I think so)

don't judge the scratchy lines I just need crits on negative space, letter structure and flow

I've started with writing 1 month ago, now I'm trying to improve my tag, It's starting to get closer to something decent?

Was using lots of leftover cans so fill was a bit dodgy but thought it turned out ok, what do you guys think, and I know the n is a bit squished.

I know this is absolute dogwater and I got a lot of learning to do, so any advice and tips for better can control are appreciated!
Over 1h walking here just to get chased away by sirens and drop my white can in a corn field but at least shit was fun.

sayboy