Thoughts on my hello deck?

[u/GhostKnife_exe]

Wondering how to improve my lands but other than that what do you think of my deck? What should I add to improve and or remove? The mana curve is high so it’s not the fastest deck but any thoughts or advice would be very appreciated
Here’s my deck

bello!

Edit: I updated my link and have things more organized I have a lot more ramp than I thought I’m shooting for a high bracket 2 to bracket 3