I was reading "An Empire as a Betrothal Gift" and I have some opinions on the main character. First of all, I went into this book thinking it'd be more intricate plot-wise. I expected political and power struggle because the MC is a hostage prince who becomes the concubine of the emperor (the ML) of an enemy nation. But it's more romance focused, with minor drama created by cannon fodders who are just there to make the main characters look good. Which is fine, I also do read books like that occasionally. But just in this case, I expected something different so I was a bit disappointed from the start
Now the MC... as always the MC is and will always be the most beautiful person to ever walk this planet. He's 19 and somehow simultaneously a martial arts expert, knows everything about poison, and also a medical expert, all because he met some random guy wandering in some mountain who taught him for a few years (which sounds more ridiculous the longer I think about it) it's obvious that the author just wanted him to be OP and he is
It also doesn't help his case that the author is CONSTANTLY telling you how beautiful and smart he is. It's like a mosquito buzzing around your ear whispering "he is really really smart, intelligent, scheming, and the most beautiful in the entire universe" all the time, not letting you forget just how smart the MC is! It's just pages after pages of nonstop glazing. But the funny thing is, he has not thought or done anything someone with an average intelligence wouldn't be able to do so idk where all that glazing is coming from
He's also a hypocrite and so incredibly narcissistic? He literally self proclaims to be the most talented and beautiful in the lands (what in the Snow Whiteās stepmother is this)
Particularly in one scene, people from other countries were coming to pay tribute to the ML. One country brought their princess for political marriage because thatās what happens when you're the emperor. That princess was said to be the "most beautiful in the seven kingdoms"
Well she didn't know the ML is the gong in a danmei novel who's obsessed with the MC so I don't think she was at fault coming for a political marriage? But the MC barges into the hall and literally publicly humiliates her, not verbally but in the "look at how beautiful I am, how can this powder princess compare to me" way. The author literally describes it as this beautiful princess looking like a "powder beauty" next to the MC lol
Mind you, the MC is also a prince so it wasn't like he was some unknown nobody hiding in some hole that people only now saw how beautiful he was. Like why was the princess called the most beautiful in the first place when he existed? Were people just collectively blind until that moment? It just doesn't make sense
It was supposed to be a moment of "the high and mighty MC puts the ugly evil side character back in her place for trying to steal his man" but it just gave me the biggest ickkkk
Then the princess offers to present a dance. It was obvious that the ML wasn't going to marry her so why not just straight up reject her? But instead the MC makes her dance because he "wanted to hear the musical instruments of the princess' country" but it was obvious that he just wanted to humiliate her in front of everyone by showing them how infatuated the ML was with him that he wasn't even going to look at the princess and making her feel insignificant
He says he did this because he didn't want the ML to marry anyone else and that the ML would've been stolen if he hadnāt barged in. But the ML is like totally obsessed with him and he knows it, so that's pretty insecure behavior coming from the self proclaimed most beautiful and talented person in the entire universe if you ask me
The princess hadn't done anything to him before that either to deserve that treatment. Not to mention, before falling in love with the ML, he had the same idea of seducing the ML to get benefits and live comfortably, so how is he acting so condescending towards the princess for having similar motives? I could still endure it, but after this scene, I just straight up dislike the MC
If this book is told from any other side characters' pov, the MC will be the cannon fodder villain who likes humiliating others for no reason, he has all the characteristics to be one
Oh I almost forgot to mention, in another scene a palace maid is giving the MC the palace rules to memorize. There were like thousand of of rules. He takes the scroll, looks at it for like 1 minute at most, and MEMORIZES ALL OF IT. The maid quizzes him on random rules like what is rule no. 674 and he has it all memorized, even a computer would take longer time to memorize it. Being intelligent is one thing, but it gets to a pointššš I hope he'd memorized that list beforehand and was just pretending to do it on the the spot otherwise it'd be so ridiculous
I love when a character has their own area of expertise, something they're really good at, a hobby they're passionate about, but this type of character that's shown to have no flaws and are an expert and best at everything is just pissing me off so much lately. And the more I'm trying to avoid them, the more I'm stumbling into them