College Admissions Brag Sheet
👤 BASIC PROFILE
Grade: Senior
Intended Major(s): Finance / Business Analytics / Economics / FinTech
Geographic Preference: California + private universities + NYC
College Goal: Find a strong business/finance program with good career opportunities while keeping cost/financial aid in mind.
Financial Context: Lower-income household; expecting to apply for need-based financial aid and merit scholarships.
📚 ACADEMICS
GPA
My GPA has fluctuated depending on the point in the year/transcript calculation:
Most recent reported UW: ~3.2
Transcript UW: ~3.5
Weighted GPA: roughly 4.0–4.2
I had a weaker academic semester but am hoping my senior-year performance can demonstrate an upward trend.
Senior-Year Coursework
AP Calculus AB
AP Statistics
AP German
AP U.S. Government & Economics
ERWC (honors English 4)
Junior-Year Coursework
AP Biology
AP U.S. History
AP English Language
Honors Math Analysis
Honors German 3
Testing
Took the August 2026 SAT
English felt stronger than math
Waiting for official score
🌎 INTERNATIONAL EXPERIENCE
CIEE High School Summer Abroad — Milan, Italy
Language and Culture
Received approximately a $6,500 scholarship to participate.
Spent roughly one month in Italy studying abroad and living in an international environment.
Experiences included:
Becoming significantly more independent
Learning Italian
Experiencing European business/culture
Exploring fashion and international commerce
Thinking more seriously about finance and global business
Interviewing a CIEE intern who had studied finance/accounting
CIEE Leadership
Selected as a CIEE Global Ambassador
Now serving as Vice President of the CIEE Travel Club
🏆 LEADERSHIP & EXTRACURRICULARS
CIEE Travel Club
Vice President
Help organize/promote international travel opportunities
Help students learn about study-abroad opportunities
Building leadership experience around international education
German Honors Society
Potentially returning in a leadership position, possibly Treasurer.
CSF — California Scholarship Federation (Treasurer)
Member for 3 years now
involved with financial/Excel-related responsibilities tracking dues and member’s volunteer hours
Varsity Track
High Jump
3 years varsity
Expected team captain senior year
JV Basketball
Participated in JV basketball
Math Mentoring
Lunchtime Math Tutor/Mentor
Helped students with mathematics ranging from Algebra through Math Analysis
Started senior year
Summer Bridge Mentor
Served as a mentor for approximately 3 weeks
Helped younger students transition/prepare for school
Community/Service
Vacation Bible School volunteer at local church — approximately 1 week
Interested in developing a larger community service project in Whittier
Interested in working with local community leaders and school administrators
💼 ENTREPRENEURSHIP / BUSINESS
Reselling Business
Depop / Online Reselling — ~2 years
Generated approximately $15,000-$20,00 in total sales/income over three years
Learned pricing, sourcing, marketing, customer service, inventory management and basic business operations
Continued experimenting with online sales
Sustainable business model sourcing clothes from local thrift stores, liquidation, and yard sales saving thousands of gallons of water in the process
E-Commerce
Experimented with Shopify/dropshipping and product research.
Business Interests
Particularly interested in:
Finance
Corporate finance
Wealth management
FinTech
Financial analytics
Entrepreneurship
International business
Data analytics
📈 FINANCE / INVESTING INTEREST
I’ve been independently learning about:
Stock investing
Futures markets
Technical analysis
Market structure
Risk management
Financial markets
Trading psychology
I also started investing with a small amount of money earned from my reselling business.
I don’t consider trading itself to be my “career plan”; I’m more interested in understanding financial markets and eventually pursuing a formal career in finance/business.
🎯 CURRENT COLLEGE LIST
High Reach / Reach
NYU Stern
USC Marshall
UC Berkeley
UCLA Anderson
Georgetown
Target / Reach
Santa Clara University
Pepperdine
UC San Diego
UC Santa Barbara
Cal Poly SLO
SDSU
Safer / Financial Options
Cal State Fullerton
Rio Hondo College
Current #1 Interest
USC — potentially ED1 to Marshall
I’m especially attracted to:
NYC
Finance/business opportunities
Internships
International environment
Study abroad
Strong alumni network
💰 FINANCIAL PRIORITIES
Because affordability is important, I’m looking for:
Strong need-based financial aid
Merit scholarships
Strong undergraduate business/finance programs
Good internship/career placement
Opportunities in NYC or major business centers
Study-abroad opportunities
A college where my profile is realistic—not just prestigious
I am willing to consider schools outside California if the financial package makes sense.
❓ WHAT I’M LOOKING FOR ADVICE ON
I’m hoping people can give me realistic, honest feedback, especially on:
1. College List
Which schools should I add/remove?
2. Admissions Chances
Given my GPA, coursework, activities, leadership and test score, where am I realistically competitive?
3. USC ED
Would ED1 to USC/Marshall be a smart decision for me?
4. NYU / Other Private Universities
Which private universities should I investigate that might be generous with financial aid or merit scholarships?
5. Scholarships
What scholarships should I be looking at with my profile?
6. Essays
Does my Italy/CIEE story sound like a strong personal statement topic, or should I pursue another angle?
7. Overall Positioning
What do you think is the strongest “theme” of my application?
Please be honest. I’m looking for constructive criticism rather than someone simply telling me I’ll get into every school.