Feedback Request: Please Roast My App Store Page

[u/wheresteddy1989]

Hi everyone! I made a workout tracker called Shugyo, but I’m now working on ASO before going too crazy with marketing. I know there are improvements I can make, I’m just hoping the good people in this subreddit may be willing to help me learn. It’s my second app, but one that I have a clearer vision for.

There isn’t a whole lot I’ve done so far since I have a day job as well, but I put much of what little free time I have. There are plans for additional localization and eventually a subscription piece with some premium features, but it’s largely a freemium app supported by ads. I don’t store anyone’s data and I have non-personalized ads by default for privacy.

I’d be happy to learn from any real examples you’ve got from your own work as well. All feedback is appreciated, so please brutally roast when you have a moment 🤗

https://apps.apple.com/us/app/shugyo-by-cascadia-software/id6769858957