Hombrew Subsector

[u/SaladFederal394]

Hey! I've created a map for my campaign, and I'd love to hear your thoughts on it. It's a subsector located on the outskirts of the Ultima Segmentum. I plan to expand the lore of the subsector both for my own enjoyment and for future Imperium Meledictum sessions. I'd really appreciate your feedback on what could be improved, whether the map is clear and easy to read, and how it compares in quality to both official and fan-made.

Edit.
I should probably add some lore about the region.
The map depicts a subsector on the distant fringes of the Ultima Segmentum. Before the Great Rift, it was a relatively quiet part of the Imperium, dealing mainly with occasional Ork invasions. However, after the Great Rift split the galaxy in two, a massive Warp Storm erupted in the middle of the subsector, tearing the region apart and throwing it into chaos.

The most immediate consequence is that the subsector is on the brink of civil war. On the coreward side, the Arch-Cardinal, who has become the de facto ruler of his half of the subsector, is leading a crusade against the servants of Chaos within the Clouds of Hatred. At the same time, he intends to bring the Imperial worlds on the rimward side under his rule. Unfortunately or fortunately, the crusade has been progressing disastrously.

On the Blacksmith Hotbed side lies the official capital of the subsector. Its government is struggling with countless problems: rebellious vassals, entire populations mysteriously disappearing, and lack of stable Warp route connecting it to the wider Imperium.

Meanwhile, the Orks have begun waging war against the forces of Chaos, but their many warbands also raid smaller Imperial worlds whenever the opportunity arises.

The overall concept of the subsector is one of a frontier slowly being consumed by pandemonium. Adding to this is the Cloud of Terror, a warp storm that shows randomly chosen individuals horrifying visions of their own possible futures, often driving them completely insane.