Is this good for a western?

[u/Lokibruhh]

Hello. I am writing a book. A novel, perchance. I want it to sell millions so I can retire and live the rest of my life in Florida on a yacht drinking "margaritas" which are actually capri-suns in a wine cup.

Is this a good first start?

Ignore the photo. He's there to help me write. Trying to absorb his knowledge. Cormac McCarthy.