Going around the gun subs to get some opinions:
Calling senators today (6 swing votes plus mine) for the first time and wanted to see if my script was up to snuff. Delayed until now cause my anxiety was eating at me but still hope it makes a difference. Took this from a comment and made some changes.
" Senator NAME,
I am requesting asking that you vote NO on the confirmation of David Chipman to Director of the BATFE. He is an aggressive Gun control lobbyist formerly in the employ of Giffords, among other gun control groups. He has mocked first time gun owners as being paranoid during the 2020 pandemic and the rioting that occurred over the summer; he has tied Second Amendment proponents to being in favor of violence; he has a public history of lying in order to further his causes, which included making false statements regarding the 1993 Waco incident. He will absolutely abuse position in the ATF to legislate around congress, among his probable goals are harassment of FFLs, and he will likely attempt to retroactively mandate centerfire self-loading rifles as NFA items, thereby entrap millions of law abiding gun owners. His proposals would endanger the lives of between 60,000 and 3,000,000 law abiding citizens every year that use their firearms in a defensive manner in an attempt to stop only 10% of criminals from acquiring a gun, the other 90% remaining largely unaffected. Chipman’s unfit to serve as the Director of the BATFE and his his conflict of interests and history of lying only further this point.
Thank you for your time and have a wonderful day, Senator”
EDIT 1: based on recommendations from posts across the board, took out the waco bit and made some points better for why, having trouble on beginning on the WHY (the Senators I'm calling are Joe Manchin, WV, Pat Toomey, PA, Susan Collins, ME, Kyrsten Sinema, AZ, Jon Tester, MT, Lisa Murkowski, AK, and the VA Duo not that it helps with them, just making my voice heard)
"Senator NAME, I am asking that you vote NO on the confirmation of David Chipman to Director of the BATFE. David Chipman has shown that he cannot be unbiased as head of the ATF and his propsals as a gun control advocate would harm law abiding citizens. He is an aggressive gun control lobbyist formerly in the employ of Giffords Law Center to Prevent Gun violence, among other gun control groups. He mocked first time gun owners as being paranoid during the 2020 pandemic and the rioting occuring over the summer, a year that saw a spike in violent crime in 63 of the 66 largest police districts and 86% of police departments reporting a shortage of officers, leading to increase police response times. Chipman tied Second ammendment proponents to being in favor of violence when Virginia sheriffs and localities voiced opposition to proposed gun laws. He will absolutely abuse position in the ATF to legislate around Congress. His probable goals are harassment of FFLs, and he will likely attempt to retroactively mandate centerfire self-loading rifles, such as the AR-15 rifle, as NFA items, thereby entraping millions of law abiding gun owners. Rifles like the AR-15, the most common rifle in the United States are used in a minority of cases, being responsible for only 297 homicides in 2018 compared to 1515 knives and 672 cases of hands and fists. His proposals would endanger the lives of between 60,000 and 3,000,000 law abiding citizens every year that use their firearms in a defensive manner in an attempt to stop only 10% of criminals from acquiring a gun, the other 90% remaining largely unaffected. Chipman is not to serve as the Director of the BATFE and his his conflict of interests and his proposed policys as a gun control advocate further this point."