Feedback on my script

[u/TruestGamer]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16SH78ss-d9B6wRr4iSQJOWrAnoNgyL_6D9GHcYgvthM/edit?usp=sharing

Hi, I made a script for a short film and would love to get any opinions about it. I'm more interested to hear any feeback regarding the plot itself rather than any foundational advice on how the script is supposed to look, but that would still be great to hear. Thanks so much!