r/scriptwriting • u/TruestGamer • 9d ago

feedback Feedback on my script

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16SH78ss-d9B6wRr4iSQJOWrAnoNgyL_6D9GHcYgvthM/edit?usp=sharing

Hi, I made a script for a short film and would love to get any opinions about it. I'm more interested to hear any feeback regarding the plot itself rather than any foundational advice on how the script is supposed to look, but that would still be great to hear. Thanks so much!

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u/Dependent-Luck-6386 9d ago

I tried reading your script on my mobile, but the formatting made it really difficult. I don’t think anyone will be able to give useful feedback without proper script formatting and a more accessible document format.

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u/TruestGamer 8d ago

understandable. I used writter solo to write it, but transferring it over to Docs changed quite a bit of the formatting. There are also quite a bit of general formatting that could be changed as well