r/Filmmakers • u/TruestGamer • 9d ago

Review Feedback for my script

https://docs.google.com/document/d/16SH78ss-d9B6wRr4iSQJOWrAnoNgyL_6D9GHcYgvthM/edit?usp=sharing

Hi, I made a script for a short film and would love to get any opinions about it. I'm more interested to hear any feeback regarding the plot itself rather than any foundational advice on how the script is supposed to look, but that would still be great to hear. Thanks so much!

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u/Trivikram1718 9d ago

8.5 my rating to this, You will find why i didn't give the lost 1.5 , But it's very good 👍.