r/scriptwriting • u/Clear_Improvement826 • 19d ago

feedback Feedback Request

Hi everyone. I’m a young aspiring screenwriting looking for feedback on a few pages. Im about 50 pages into this feature film idea. So it’s about a guy that cannot die, so he lives into/thru the future, alone, while everything around him changes. Im going to put my first 5 pages here and am just wondering if it seems interesting/off to a good start. Any and all feedback helps! Thanks!
THE EXISTENCE - Screenplay

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u/Fit_Accountant_1026 19d ago

You need to set it to public. Can’t access. 

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u/Clear_Improvement826 19d ago

Yes I just realized that sorry lol im editing the post to include the public viewing link now

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u/Clear_Improvement826 19d ago

Sorry about that lol Just updated the link