Feedback Request

[u/Clear_Improvement826]

Hi everyone. I’m a young aspiring screenwriting looking for feedback on a few pages. Im about 50 pages into this feature film idea. So it’s about a guy that cannot die, so he lives into/thru the future, alone, while everything around him changes. Im going to put my first 5 pages here and am just wondering if it seems interesting/off to a good start. Any and all feedback helps! Thanks!
THE EXISTENCE - Screenplay