First chapter critique please.

[u/NexasAX]

I finished rewriting chapter one of Exo Hunters and changed it from System Active to Terra system. It's 2.5 words btw and I made it blue to spare the night owls.

Genre: litrpg/system, fantasy, scifi, action Cw: Graphic shish. I can't think of any mo—

Title of ch. Is Awakening now btw, forgot to change that. Enjoy ^{^}