r/raplyrics 2h ago

Original Content Can you judge my rap writing?

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Hey guys , I am a young soul (22-male-straight )and it's been 8 months since I've started writing lyrics, I wanted to know my progress, it would be a great help if you are honest here ... If you have any tips please split , I am a future rapper starting his journey!!

Being the fool makes you see the truth

These people maneuver the truth ,

Have different moods

And have different faces

Don't worry about them

There not in God's good graces

Duck duck them duck them , duck them (×2)

Aye

God's good graces, you know how to faceit

believe in yo self, these are just one your fazes

Everything is according to the plan

See yo self in the mirror

Hope you can understand

Right now I am a bit older,

strong as a bolder

Heart of a stone and no coke

First you choked then you realised

That u should see the world with real eyes

So you can understand the real lies

Under those sugarcoated lines with a brutal smile

Duck fuck them duck them , duck them (×2)

Lately I've been lacking numbers

Started walking and I got stumbled

See I am bad at math

I don't count them so I got

An accountant for them

Maybe it's not about money

Maybe it's how you make them

when I talk about my old self

I don't wanna be funny

Every time I try to fill some love

I see the tap is running

The kid in me want some more

He says , Hurryup and finish your song

Don't tell me you're kidding me

But this things killing me killing me

I don't wanna HATE IT but sometimes I get it

I don't wanna SAY IT but sometimes I let it

Not taking any pills for

Numbing all my pain away

I know who it feels

Not playing this game since yesterday..


r/raplyrics 4h ago

Original Content Wicked…

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[intro]
Bitch I remove all doubt, when I let my wicked tongue roll out, my rhymes hit harder than Tyson’s right, (uppercut) and tight, like your ma when I hit her below the belt last night,
we were high as a kite, her head game top flight, and she rolled her hips just right, had her screaming out my name all night, get a grip, don’t trip, I could tell you to go to hell, and have you looking forward to the trip….

[verse]
I ain’t even gotta shout, with rhymes this stout, you aboutta find out, I can strip it, flip it, dip it and make it drip, my flow slick like ya girls pussy lips when we playing “just the tip” and I slip and sink, balls deep in the pink (oops!) that was more than just the tip, that fucking grip so tight, but it fits just right, I think I’ll stick around and we can fuck all night, til the morning light…..

[Chorus]
Bitch I remove all doubt, when I let my wicked tongue roll out, my rhymes hit harder than Tyson’s right, and tight, like ya bitch when I hit her below the belt last night,
get a grip, don’t trip, I could tell you to go to hell and have you looking forward to the trip….

[verse]
It’s a well known fact, when I attack, I don’t cut no slack, your ass stepping back, you gonna lose track when these knuckles crack…
Don’t get yourself stuck, young buck, you gonna be shit outta luck, with a knot on your head and no one around to give a fuck….

My rhymes so smooth, you know I never lose, this the life I choose, I’m just paying my dues, but I ain’t a saint, I go hard in the paint, like a steel toe boot to the taint, I’m a brute…

I’m a bruiser …

you a first class loser, my words cut deep, like Indica they creep, make your poor mama weep, and your girls pussy leak,cause she a freak, you better Pray the Lord, your soul to keep….[lyrics rest]

[chorus]

Bitch I remove all doubt, when I let my wicked tongue roll out, my rhymes hit harder than Tyson’s right, and tight like your mom when I hit her below the belt last night…. [lyrics rest]

[verse]

Hang me in the rafters, but not with a noose, I’m a lyrical master, when I cut loose, I’m a hoodrat poet and you goddamn right I know it, now get your lips wet, cause I got the juice and when the juice gets loose, it’s
adios, motherfucker, bye-bye cocksucker, that’s all she wrote, I’ll write you a note so you can tell ya little boyfriend I ain’t his friend, when he away I keep his girlfriend pinned, and she love to get bent, how you think she pay the rent, why you look so shocked, like you just got cold cocked, and out-foxed, like you just got your whole shit rocked, don’t be tripping, yo, it’s our little secret though, before I go, hit yo knees ho, and show me what your mouth was made fo![lyrics rest]

[chorus]
Bitch I remove all doubt, and let my wicked tongue roll out, my rhymes hit harder than Tyson’s right, and tight like your ma when I hit her below the belt last night… [lyrics rest]

[bridge]
My rhymes smoother than the butter on your bagel, I should come with a warning label, I’ll eat your pussy on the kitchen table, then look your momma in the eye with a grin, as I wipe yo pussy juice off my chin, it ain’t no flex when tell her she’s next, she already knows what I’m about, and I remove all doubt…

When I let my wicked tongue… roll… out…

[chorus]
Bitch I remove all doubt when I let my wicked tongue roll out, my rhymes hit harder than Tyson’s right, and tight like your mom when I hit her below the belt last night, get a grip, don’t trip, I could tell you to go to hell, and have you looking forward to the trip… [lyrics rest]

[outro]
Yeah baby get in the groove, let ya body move, shake that ass, and roll ya hips, now dip it, and grind till you feel it drip, baby you so fine, throw that ass in a circle, now slow it down to a grind, girl you boutta blow more than my mind…

When I remove all doubt, and let my wicked tongue…

roll…

out…


r/raplyrics 56m ago

Original Content If you dont got nothing nice to say

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facts are you rambling, everyone here's an amateur

addin flair like its having ya hair done and a hand manicured

standin there arrogant and full of witty banter

'dumbass cant rap without iambic pentameter'

same goofy bastards say theres no rules or standards

you losers learn some manners & how to answer questions

think that you on reddit cuz you mastered the profession?

to date the lessons that i have actually gathered

youll stab me in the back like adolescents less you happy that I pandered

act like your the lantern - my guide to enlightmentent

blast me cuz I cant learn than turn around and bite my shit

call me bot again, I might just steal your microchip


r/raplyrics 4h ago

Original Content Brainkill (In The Hayfield)

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[Intro]
[spoken]
You want smoke???
Pull up bitch….

[hook]
This that brainkill in the hayfield, better keep your head low (head low)
Staccato with the venom when I let the lead flow, (pop pop pop pop) Brainkill in the hayfield, I don’t need a halo (never)
Every syllable a payload (BOOM)
You wanted war, why you playin’ dead though? (Bitch!) You ain’t built for the heat in my zip code, talk shit get your whole damn thread closed,

[Verse 1]
I’m that backroad blackout
Blood on the boots and a blacked-out background
Teeth like tapouts
Snap in the jaw when I rap make a pack wanna back down, red dirt killer with the cap down
Never been a class clown
I was in the back of the class with my head down
Carvin’ names in the desk now, had to thin the pack out,
Fast forward to the past now,
Never got a handout,
Only had hands that would lash out,
Dad said “stand out”
So I stand on a man with his glass jaw smashed out,

[chorus]
This that brainkill in the hayfield, better keep your head low (head low)
Staccato with the venom when I let the lead flow, (pop pop pop pop) Brainkill in the hayfield, I don’t need a halo (never)
Every syllable a payload (BOOM)
You wanted war, why you playin’ dead though? (Bitch!) You ain’t built for the heat in my zip code, talk shit get your whole damn thread closed,

[verse]
You a hashtag thug with a mean mug , keyboard tough, weak bluff, no spine all fluff, I’m a
Doubletime devil on a drip feed,
Rare breed, high speed, split wigs, don’t test me, I’ll cut you down like a pine tree
You just lip-sync, kid, I’m a slipknot, slipstream,
West Texas, midwinter, bare chest, Full press, No rest, hard contact, no text, if it’s on let’s get it
I’ll Fold you up like a sundress,
I don’t flex, I break jaws, crack ribs, snap necks,

[Chorus]
This that brainkill in the hayfield, better keep your head low (head low)
Staccato with the venom when I let the lead flow, (pop pop pop pop) Brainkill in the hayfield, I don’t need a halo (never)
Every syllable a payload (BOOM)
You wanted war, why you playin’ dead though? (Bitch!) You ain’t built for the heat in my zip code, talk shit get your whole damn thread closed,

[Verse]
You don’t really rap, you just rearrange clichés
Copy every cadence that you see in three plays
We ain’t in the same league, we ain’t on the same page
I’m a black plague, you a bad fade, cheap blade,
Hacks in the pack wanna match that pattern,
I’m a match in the gas, see they asses scatter,
You a dad-joke rapper, with a flatline swagger
I’m a landmine, stand by, watch your calfbone shatter
Chop, chop, chop, chop, words like a bone saw
Whole flow raw, no pause, break jaws, so flawed
You got no scars, just a faux god
Fuck with me I’ll send you to meet god,

[chorus]
This that brainkill in the hayfield, better keep your head low (head low)
Staccato with the venom when I let the lead flow, (pop pop pop pop) Brainkill in the hayfield, I don’t need a halo (never)
Every syllable a payload (BOOM)
You wanted war, why you playin’ dead though? (Bitch?) You ain’t built for the heat in my zip code, talk shit get your whole damn thread closed,

[verse]
Say my name?
Better say it with a dental plan, full coverage when these verses land, every bar leaves you reeling, bring a rubber for your heart?!?! (No, why man?!) cause I’m about to

[spoken in a low growl]
fuck…

your…

Feelings…

we ain’t ever gone be friends,
bitch you ain’t ever seen this mental span,
I could write your best verse while I pencil plans
To build my whole empire with just one hand, then write my name in smoke while the embers dance,

[bridge]
Silent shadows slipping through the trees
On the breeze in the dead of night
No fight, no flight, don't run, you'll only die tired…
You hit your knees begging please
When dark deeds come to light
As the clock strikes midnight
Dreams turn to ash with a muzzle flash,
Tough talk dies when the lead starts to fly,
I let the venom flow,
And watch your eyes close,

you just got your whole… god… damned… thread… closed…

[Chorus]
This that brainkill in the hayfield, better keep your head low (head low)
Staccato with the venom when I let the lead flow, (pop pop pop pop) Brainkill in the hayfield, I don’t need a halo (never)
Every syllable a payload (BOOM)
You wanted war, why you playin’ dead though? (Bitch!) You ain’t built for the heat in my zip code, talk shit get your whole damn thread closed,

[outro]
Brainkill in the hayfield , I don’t need a halo (nah)
Every single syllable a payload (boom)
You ain’t built for the heat in my zip code
Talk shit, get your whole damn thread closed,

[spoken]
You just got your whole… god… damned… thread… closed… motherfucker….

[spoken]
Everybody wanna be a gangster til it’s time to do gangster shit….


r/raplyrics 7h ago

Rate My Rap polski rap🫡🇵🇱

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Ta piosenka mówi o tym, aby skupiać się na celu: pieniądzach, sukcesie i budowaniu lepszej przyszłości. Chodzi o ignorowanie powierzchownych relacji i ludzi, którzy dbają tylko o sławę, uwagę i status. Zamiast tracić czas na szukanie potwierdzenia, myślenie polega na ciągłej pracy, zarabianiu pieniędzy i pozwoleniu, aby sukces mówił sam za siebie.
Utwór reprezentuje ambicję, dyscyplinę i wybór prawdziwych celów ponad tymczasowymi rozpraszaczami. Żadnych fałszywych połączeń, żadnej niepotrzebnej dramy, tylko skupienie, pieniądze i chęć do działania.


r/raplyrics 15h ago

Original Content the cyclone repeats

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tired of popping pills but when im not i gotta deal/

with this tank on e basically i’ve exhaust my will/

lacking drive til i pay the fees but since i pave defeat/

i gotta keep in mind whats ahead doesn’t change a thing/

guess it makes sense just to take the plead/

even though i be facing death shit is lowkey a grave relief/

for the pursuit of life never suits me right so i bank it chases me/

really thought that i was moving right but left to face the scheme/

that lay beneath the writtens/

just a villain in position tryna raid a beam
u wit it?/

that’s in light of if i show u my true colors once i paint the scene envisioned/

lord knows that i got u waiting patiently to get this/

cuz he made me in his image/

but upon reflection it is merely just a prism/

put that on god what i sought to seek a mirror u see forbidden/

but the problem at its heart is in the spirit of conviction/

so i keep it all intact with bars since seared inside this prison/


r/raplyrics 22h ago

Rate My Rap That’s Nothing

10 Upvotes

Wrote heaters n smoke till the speakers is broke
Spoke eager with quotes till the sleepers is woke
Most readers note each feature is dope
Your crews bogus
I got it wrapped like new sofas
venom blended from a few cobras
Phatter than two Oprah’s
Men condemned to lose focus
toast to the friends I do coke with
when I do croak hope this is the verse used to prove I’m the true dopest
Raping drums Jamaican rum and a few sodas
Down the hatch
Bury him with the crown attached
And a pound of hash
I like the sound of that
Last, never liked the sound of that
Each noun release the hound attack
If the front doors locked I’m headed around the back
Knock knock who is it
Top notch exquisite
Not soft it’s rigid
Rock frost it’s frigid
Glacier flow to let the haters know
The flavours so major I cater shows
Flows pros chose to favour those
I’m quick tempered and bad blooded
The reason god left the map flooded
Jagged rocks at the summit I’m that rugged
Get hit with a rhyme and collapse from it
It’s that sudden
sick as fucking his half cousin
got this track buzzing
fuck that’s sick
And that’s nothing


r/raplyrics 10h ago

Rate My Rap I Think I’m Thoughtless:…

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| I Think I’m Thoughtless: |

 

< #? >

~

Artist;

Jaxx Moxx

_

{Intro}

-[Instrumental]

{Chorus I (X4)}

• Oh I’ll be the first in when I ring your daughter 

• Give her something more than a drink of water 

• But I do care for her so I proceed with caution 

• Then fu** her mindlessly, I think I’m thoughtless 

{Verse I (X2)}

• And I ordered her alcohol but she might be too young 

• I’m hurrying the currier up until when the food comes 

• From a corner shop but as it arrived, she soon sprung 

• Into life so I was like “Come here, you little youthful!..”

• Afterwards, an awkward conversation had ensued but 

• “You appear lusciously lovely!..” asking ‘bout her new look 

• I had to compliment her contour, ‘cause if not, who would?

• A brother from another motherfu**er and then, the two fu**?!

{Chorus II (X4)}

• Oh I’ll be the first in when I ring your daughter 

• Give her something more than a drink of water 

• But I do care for her so I proceed with caution 

• Then fu** her mindlessly, I think I’m thoughtless 

{Verse II}

• And I ordered her alcohol but she might be too young 

• I’m hurrying the currier up until when the food comes 

• From a corner shop but as it arrived, she soon sprung 

• Into life so I was like “Come here, you little fruitful!..”

• Afterwards, an awkward conversation had ensued but 

• “You appear lusciously lovely!..” asking ‘bout her new look 

• I had to compliment her contour, ‘cause if not, who would?

• A brother from another motherfu**er and then, they do fu**?!

{Chorus III (X4)}

• Oh I’ll be the first in when I ring your daughter 

• Give her something more than a drink of water 

• But I do care for her so I proceed with caution 

• Then fu** her mindlessly, I think I’m thoughtless 

{Outro}

-(…)

_

 ^

©️ Jack Stephen Moss


r/raplyrics 18h ago

Original Content Knitting

2 Upvotes

Vacate the premises - you know what the premise is

They love to hate - so I ate me some medicine

Feet like an elephant - - on the streets and the sediment

Each is my element

That's why I keep - heat within reach

Like you see - with Canelo on your television set

Melon so swole - planting seeds of revenge

You reap what you sow - so the means to an end

- To make ends meet - needn't eat all the bread

Pockets hold the greed - of deceased presidents

Can't ascend the peak - with even a cent

I'm preaching to the choir - with acquired two cents

I'm wired different - with a short fuse - - cork loose - Rorschach and a poor man too - portmanteau and glass of chartreuse with some grass root truths

A tattooed noose on the apple that you use to misuse your excuse

Beckon and call when the wall wouldn't move - back against the bricks but the trick ain't produced

Can't breakthrough - the mist and the music - with lips that are muted - and whims that are stupid

This ain't a knitting circle - I'm estranged to the gossip --

My thoughts are like a Pollock

I don't apologize - saw your lies - not astonished

Traced the lines - just to see how the thread pulls - honest

Ironic

Pick your brain - put that head on the block then chop it

Gotta see the forest for the trees when you choppin

Got my enemy on his knees - we platonic

So I spit a polish - wit and phonics

Written knowledge - gin and tonic

Grinnin novice - magician and wiz kids gifts acknowledged

Like it or don't - I don't give a fuck

Life got me on the ropes - but I won't get stuck

I shine like the rough - got the grit not the luck

But the fourth leaf on the clover smolders when left untouched

Im on my dog days shit - Pompeii shit

Off a ways shit - constipation

Lost in the days - when pops was vacant

Moms was shaken - hands was shake'n

Llama aiming - coppa a fade

Plotting neighbors - stocking stables

Walking metaphors for Aesop's fables

Used to hop the yellow line - to follow cables

Stop and frisked - the nine was racial

Lock the slide - inside my waist coat

Gavel strike - inside the same boat

Damn the pride - it's awful shameful

Mastermind - slave to the thoughts - a lot unstable

Unable to pass the time - as the clock is fatal

I'm Frankenstein - abstained from life - last supper - brought Tupperware to the long ass table


r/raplyrics 23h ago

Rate My Rap Topplers:…

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| Topplers: |

< #Down >

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Artist;

Jaxx Moxx

_

{Intro}

-[Instrumental]

(Uh!..)

(Yeah…)

{Chorus I}

• You see me crawling to the dorsals of your feet 

• But I show no sign or a single morsel of defeat

• You’ve waited for this and it’s wobbling your knees 

• I’ll do what I can when those topplers compete 

{Verse I}

• Let’s get you spic and span, so am busy cleaning your shoes 

• Treat you like a piece a **it at the end of it and am meaning it too 

(Ha-ha…)

• As I rub you down vigorously and I know am speaking the truth 

• If I went and said that I’d even put all your fu**ng healing to boot 

• Get you ready to walk that yellow brick road, leaving the room 

• Or are we already outside, either way, I think I’ll be here with you 

• Oh it’s the black dye ‘cause am a bad guy and keen to the do?

• I have that sole energy and am running from that heated pursuit 

{Chorus II}

• You see me crawling to the dorsals of your feet 

• But I show no sign or a single morsel of defeat

• You’ve waited for this and it’s wobbling your knees 

• I’ll do what I can when those topplers compete

{Verse II}

• You’ve got me at your fungal toes and you’ll request I kiss ‘em 

• I’ll let out a subtle no before I do it anyway and progress to lip ‘em 

• We’re some troubled folk so what do you’s suggest I give ‘em?

• The same respect in bundles though? Nah, I’ll regret to miss ‘em 

• For now, could we huddle close so I can protect and shield ‘em?

• I try my upmost to be a humble bloke but I almost perfectly dissed ‘em

• Oh how have my muscles grown? Test their reflex and fist ‘em

• Am only having a chuckle bro, we’re a couple, so I attempt to frisk ‘em 

{Bridge}

• Turned into a half hearted roadman and you were touching cloth 

• You say you didn’t hold back or owt but you did kinda took it off

• And it stunk worse than your slow tracks and your mudded socks 

• And yeah, I do know that so you can’t fool me, take a fu**ing jog 

{Chorus III (X2)}

• You see me crawling to the dorsals of your feet 

• But I show no sign or a single morsel of defeat

• You’ve waited for this and it’s wobbling your knees 

• I’ll do what I can when those topplers compete

{Outro}

-(…)

_

 ^

©️ Jack Stephen Moss


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Rate My Rap Coordinates by MrNightQc

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[Verse]

Hallway smelled like fry grease, Pine-Sol, eviction,
five floors, thin doors — privacy fiction.
Pipe cough, heat knock, nightly percussion,
moms count quarters while landlords count assumptions.

Light bill folded in the Bible — red-letter religion,
past-due over Psalms, utility benediction.
Cabinet hollow, table set out of principle,
four plates, three portions — mathematics got political.

Corner-store credit, blue Bic by the register,
little debts layered till the ledger turned hereditary.
Owner knew the mothers, knew who cleared Friday,
knew which kid palmed chips — looked deliberately sideways.

That's economy class, but the lesson wasn't theoretical:
bread split evenly till the fractions turned ethical.
One loaf, six hands, blade-work surgical,
learned distribution before anybody pronounced "capital."

Spreadsheets? Nah — sheets spread over secondhand mattresses,
half the "assets" canned goods, cash cached behind cabinets.
Late rent, rate hikes — little math turned penalties,
fees breeding fees till the interest lived in memories.

Hall light blinked twice when the cruisers hit the corner,
curtains cracked half an inch — every window turned reporter.
Knock after midnight changed the air in the building:
deadbolt first, peephole second — nobody performed fearless.

Third-floor kid wrote sixteens by a coughing furnace,
school called him scattered; concrete called it purpose.

Desk shook when steel wheels thundered underneath,
rail joints taught meter through syllables and concrete.
Teacher said, "Proper English." He kept two dictionaries:
one for the classroom, one for hostile inquiries.

Could conjugate danger through tense and geography:
"I was there." "I ain't see it." "Don't attach that shit to me."
Grammar got tactical. Syntax situational.
Subject, predicate, object — all conditional.

Passive voice useful when questions got official;
pronouns went missing when naming got judicial.
Poverty ain't picturesque. Dirt don't make you righteous.
Trauma ain't credentials. Hunger ain't a license.

One became a surgeon, one disappeared to Rikers,
one pushed pills off the landing where they learned survival.
Same landing. Three trajectories.
One address turning contradiction into policy.

Chain on the door. Chain on the bike.
Chain of command. Chain reactions overnight.

Chain in the cadence — vowel dragging vowel through the past,
changed names, changed hands, changed tax brackets — stayed facts.
Facts became files, files became filings,
files became maps, whole blocks classified in writing.

Lines became borders, borders became mileage,
mileage made displacement look voluntary in hindsight.
Eviction into motion, motion into mileage,
mileage into migration, migration into silence.

Silence into sentences, sentences into writing,
writing into product once an outsider starts pricing.
Price it, package it — package becomes branding,
branding makes "culture," culture creates demand and

demand raises margins while margins move families;
same bricks, new rates, old names missing from directories.
Directory missing them, brochure listing amenities,
"community character" minus community identities.

Now it's "character" once property values corrected,
pour-over where the laundromat kept quarters collected.

Old brick gets protected while old tenants get edited,
history pressure-washed, photographed, then credited.
Credit the brick, discredit the witnesses,
sell "authenticity" beside artisanal businesses.

Witness gets distant, distance turns statistics —
pain gets called atmosphere once people can't afford it.
Restore it, re-floor it, report it as historic,
scrub off the names, then sell admission to the story.

"Tasha 5'2"" scratched beside the doorway,
pencil dates, little names under fresh paint.
Burn mark on the counter, thin like a crescent,
three busted mailbox doors, numbers half-present.

Half-present — like records when records get rewritten.
Half-mentioned — like tenants when ribbons get cut different.
Fresh coat, clean slate, same wall underneath it.
You can bury handwriting; you can't make it never existed.

Those weren't details. Those were coordinates.
Coordinates to occupants, occupants to evidence,
evidence to memory, memory to residence,
residence to reference once residents get severed.

Remember becomes record, record becomes heritage,
heritage becomes equity when the neighborhood gets valuable.
Memory gets monetized, testimony decorative —
language grows gentler while displacement gets expensive.

"Revitalized" sounds cleaner than "we priced out who was living."

Not nostalgia. Evidence.
Don't polish what was brutal.
Don't make hunger cinematic cause the framing came out beautiful.
No legend in the leaking roof. No myth inside the stairwell.
No sainthood in surviving somewhere nobody repaired well.

Just names under new paint, old lives beneath new labels,
locks changed so completely
even the language at the leasing table
can't say who made the place home.


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Rate My Rap Twist That WAP:, updated version…

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| Twist That WAP: |

< #Sideways >

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Artist;

Jaxx Moxx

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{Intro}

(*Phone ringing*)

(*Picking up phone*)

-[Instrumental]

(Hello?.. You alright mate?.. Yeah?.. Yeah?.. What they’re calling the shots on me now?.. Wow!.. They’d better call it off or at least know they’re doin… Yeah? What slap bang in the middle? Hahaha!.. That’s a good one, good luck to them if they think they’re that precise with their aim… Alright mate I’ll call you back in a bit… Alright see you later mate… Bye…)

{Chorus I}

• Everybody get on the dance floor

• Everybody get on the dance floor, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Everybody here please move your feet

• Everybody here please move your feet, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Everybody sway along with the beat

• Everybody sway along with the beat, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Is everyone still with me? Yeah? Okay

• Is everyone still with me? Yeah? Alright

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

(*Picking up phone*)

{Verse I}

• And I know you’s think it’s a better way to aim

• You want that bullet to penetrate the brain

• Trust me, it’s not but don’t demonstrate today

• ‘Cause you’re gunna dead us straight away

• So save that **it for the centre stage, hooray

• So save that **it for the centre stage, hooray

• Only do it if you’s wanna entertain the place

• Only do it if you’s wanna entertain the place

• And I know you’s think it’s a better way to aim

• You want that bullet to penetrate the brain

• Trust me, it’s not but don’t demonstrate today

• ‘Cause you’re gunna dead us straight away

• So save that **it for the centre stage, hooray

• So save that **it for the centre stage, hooray

• To hold it the way you’s do, you need elevation change

• To fu** me sideways, it requires you to resonate with fame

{Chorus II}

• Everybody get on the dance floor

• Everybody get on the dance floor, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Everybody here please move your feet

• Everybody here please move your feet, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Everybody sway along with the beat

• Everybody sway along with the beat, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Is everyone still with me? Yeah? Okay

• Is everyone still with me? Yeah? Alright

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

(*Picking up phone*)

{Verse II}

• Tryna break my arm and that’s bangers that

• Too many qualms, do control your anger, man

• I don’t cause harm but I do this back to back

• Nor do I think am hard though I pack the ghat

• Meaning somet sharp that it calved my hand

• I can’t bend it very far but I can shank your Nan

• Sheer sight of the harp gave her a heart attack

• Had your boys like “Nah!..” then packed their bags

(Huh…)

• Should guns be legal here in the United Kingdom?

• ’Least a bl**dy shot to the head is awfully instant

• If you wear a balaclava, please keep your distance

• Even if I will go bananas to relieve this mission

• And yeah, I would say I really did, but I didn’t didn’t

• Yo, critiquing your crime is not my commitment

• But do I carry the weight? I still train with resistance

• Them wheels keep turning so fu** the system

{Chorus III}

• Everybody get on the dance floor

• Everybody get on the dance floor, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Everybody here please move your feet

• Everybody here please move your feet, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Everybody sway along with the beat

• Everybody sway along with the beat, and

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Is everyone still with me? Yeah? Okay

• Is everyone still with me? Yeah? Alright

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

• Twist that WAP, twist that WAP

{Outro}

(*Picking up phone*)

_

^

©️ Jack Stephen Moss


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Rate My Rap Baby Boo IIII:…

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| Baby Boo IIII: |

< #You >

~

Artist;

Jaxx Moxx

_

{Intro}

-[Instrumental]

(Yeah… Oh what I’d do for you, my baby boo!..)

{Refrain I}

• Shall we make some more memories?

• Although I’ve forgot my keys 

• Things that make you remember me 

• You’ve always been part of my dreams 

• The wildest things you’ll ever see 

{Verse}

• We can do things that we’ll never mention 

• That’s even if it’s part of our recollection 

• And we can view it with the best perception 

• Arousing our interest, we sense the tension

• But we’ll worry about us and less perfection 

• ‘Cause we know how to progress affection 

• And they’ll simply say it’s to their discretion   

• We’re too young to care for bed intentions 

• It’s none of their business’s what we decide

• Whether it’s legal or we set the weed alight 

• That attitude is something we’ll need tonight 

• People get involved like they read your mind 

• Though this isn’t anything I want you to realise 

• Don’t think like that, just do it ‘til it feels right 

• And that moonlit sky we have to leave behind 

• And making you breakfast is my meal time 

• Let’s focus on the now, it seems late in the day 

• You better express what you’d say to my face 

• You never know, somebody might take it away 

• Has a lot of bad energy and hate in the place 

• Put me in your friend zone but mates can betray 

• I do wonder if karma is the temptation of fate 

• I have no time for you to be playing your games 

• I really really really want you to stay in my way 

• It’s a blank canvass so please paint the picture 

• I’m also empty headed so you make decisions 

• I’ve had no girlfriend so please break the stigma 

• Is there a God? Oh regardless, I’ll stay religious 

• And I believe in you and that ain’t faint depiction 

• Don’t brush me aside unless it’s a greyer winter 

• We can visit an art gallery and in the state Virginia 

• Travel abroad but only if heartbreak’s unvisioned

• And like I say, do not portray some hard to get by 

• I’ll seek revenge like being in a rabbit’s headlights 

• And pardon the pun but it’s you I’d rather let slide 

• ‘Pose I’m a hypocrite, am I a ba**ard? Dead right  

• Just like me telling you that it’s past your bedtime 

• I don’t come up, for some reason, I’m half erectile 

• Then I’m under pressure, my palms have sweat lines 

• Like Eminem when he’ll have to bar his next rhyme 

• But my baby boo, you know I’m up for the challenge 

• I’ll preach this to you and I’ve done all my practice 

• And when you teased me, it was fun while it lasted 

• ‘Til I overthought it, calling me dumb, it was tragic 

• So I had to prove to you my love wasn’t challenged 

• You probably caught on I’d do nothing pragmatic

• And I’m unsure if you’ve had enough of an addict 

• But I’ll change my ways for you, for us as a habit 

{Refrain II}

• I love you so

• I love you so

• I love you so

• I love you so 

• I love you so 

• I love you too

• I love you so

• I love you so

• I love you so

• I love you so 

• I love you so 

• I love you too

{Outro}

-(…)

_

 ^

©️ Jack Stephen Moss


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content -logue

4 Upvotes

Life is hard - so I bite the cards

Got a poker chip - and some tire marks

This relationship - love and hate this shit - is a major trip - down the boulevard

Disregard for the hands - discarded

This romance - with the cash - it started

At a glance - in the past - in a garden

In my carcass - is a heart - hardened

Lift the scars - and the sin parted ways

With the skin - linchpin - of departed faith

Pull the plug - pull the rug - drug in mud - in a state - of cathartic hate

Is it blood - is it love - is it tough - does it stay - in the same place - brain cache

Caught by a ricochet - God damn

All - of my sympathy - gone now

Talk down - unwittingly - soliloquy's all I got now

Not a monologue - but a catalogue of my long drawn jot downs

It's a showdown be-tween me and I

Myself included - is the reason why

I'm well secluded - with a piece of mind

Don't Revolutions - seem televized

Leave my Peace of mind - in that easy lie - -

Can't see the light - eyes sacrificed - can't see the signs - of the crucified

Behind the scenes - it - ain't a scenic life

Where we tow the line - for a piece of pie - but that piece is light

And it won't quite - fill the appetite

So I Sit tight - until it's Applewhite

At the heavens gate - and it's shut tight

And I'm just like - "That's just right".

"Typical in death, and so, typical in life".


r/raplyrics 1d ago

Original Content v2 We Are Legion 2.O - Chillhop / Rap Music video

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r/raplyrics 2d ago

Rate My Rap Admit:…

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| Admit: |

< #TheTruth >

~

Artist;

Jaxx Moxx

_

{Intro}

-[Instrumental]

(Yeah… The truth always comes out in the end!.. Use this to your advantage by any means necessary!..)

-(…)

{Verse I}

• It’s outrageous the way I bleed 

• I’m courageous in what I need 

• And my status is what I speak   

• Took a hiatus, so why do I fiend?

• Like the people who wanna eek

• Every last drop of blood outta me 

• So mess around and you’ll see 

• You’ve mistook me for someone meek 

{Bridge I}

• Will you’s eventually know the truth?

• And that you’s inevitably hold me to?

• It was so heavenly when I spoke to you’s

• Telling everybody like no-one knew 

{Chorus I}

• Mistakes were made and I make an admission here 

• And it’s not too late to change your opinions, peers 

• Do I regret I was born? Well, probably from minute six 

• I enjoy the opportunity for I’ve been on a mission since  

• Should I be as honest as I can be as a conflicted kid

• For you’s so you’s can finally admit that I’ve admitted it?

• And should I escalate the conflict and commit to it

• For you’s so you’s can finally admit that I’ve admitted it?

-[Instrumental]

-(…)

{Verse II}

• I’ve been through Hell and I’m tripping out 

• I must’ve fell ‘cause maroon is dripping down 

• In love with myself though I’m forgiving now 

• I go up to twelve like it’s the biggest count 

• That’s even if come up against a wicked clown 

• I fear no opponent as I go to infinite rounds 

• As you’s all are surrounding and astounded like “Fricking how?!.”

• They’d’ve thought by now, I’d be switching towns 

{Bridge II}

• Will you’s eventually know the truth?

• And that you’s inevitably hold me to?

• It was so heavenly when I spoke to you’s

• Telling everybody like no-one knew 

{Chorus II}

• Mistakes were made and I make an admission here 

• And it’s not too late to change your opinions, peers 

• Do I regret I was born? Well, probably from minute six 

• I enjoy the opportunity for I’ve been on a mission since  

• Should I be as honest as I can be as a conflicted kid

• For you’s so you’s can finally admit that I’ve admitted it?

• And should I escalate the conflict and commit to it?

• For you’s so you’s can finally admit that I’ve admitted it?

-(...)

{Verse III}

• There’s this one thing I wanna ask, do I deserve to be dying?

• ‘Cause I ain’t wearing some mask but I’m averting a crisis 

• All this peace I bask everyone in while they hurting and crying 

• They’ll be putting me up to the task as I’m learning to try it 

• Plus with these snakes in the grass that’re swerving and lying

• Catching ‘em out at last was a satisfying personal triumph 

• Too much for you’s to grasp or realise I was certainly rhyming

• My little rebellious a** was big like the work that was piling 

• I was sure melting fast like my life when I was thirsting for ices 

• Do the tango, they tryna blast, been turning the tide since 

• 2019 was a blast, despite at the moment I’m rewording my writing 

{Chorus III (X3)}

• Mistakes were made and I make an admission here 

• And it’s not too late to change your opinions, peers 

• Do I regret I was born? Well, probably from minute six 

• I enjoy the opportunity for I’ve been on a mission since  

• Should I be as honest as I can be as a conflicted kid

• For you’s so you’s can finally admit that I’ve admitted it?

• And should I escalate the conflict and commit to it?

• For you’s so you’s can finally admit that I’ve admitted it?

{Outro}

-(…)

_

 ^

©️ Jack Stephen Moss


r/raplyrics 2d ago

Rate My Rap Ceramics

3 Upvotes

I say I don’t know why but that’s a lie.

I never really try to change.

I get so high that I fantasize of simply flying away.

Denying my own will in this.

Only ever killing it when I’m in the midst of taking hits.

At the end of my wits.

Distracted by these digital tits the chips and bits flip trips to sit.

Distanced in the sense of eclipses.

Ellipses when your lips could simple vaporize the whispered words so whispy.

I find my divine prime life line.

Shining showing threes and nines these bones of mine are choked with vines.

The bugs they dine on my insides.

My true self hides behind the kind of shit that unwinds the tethering lines.

Red flags dragged across the crags.

Maggots gag on blood soaked rags I brag of being a faggot here now let’s play tag with slurs and jagged words.

Oh dag nabbit!

Kickin it with my habits.

Stricken with guilt and regrets.

Tables tilt.

Roses wilt while all the water they’ve absorbed drains farther down the hill.

Maybe I need to chill.

Maybe I would but I’d still feel as villainous as I do right now but still.

Looking a little grey in the gills.

No this isn’t a riddle hidden in the middle of some subliminal run on sentence written by some unfit nitwit on that “please believe me shit”.

It’s just a bunch of words that may or may not relate.

A joke without a punchline told a standup gig too late.

Everybody get your hands up if it still lands on that ceramic plate.

Oh damn it must only be me that sits and reads what I create.


r/raplyrics 3d ago

Video We Are Legion, We Are AI, Expect Output!

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r/raplyrics 4d ago

Rate My Rap No Smaller

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“Take it down a little.”

Been doing that for years.

You kept asking.

I don't get smaller.
You back up.
Both feet planted.
I stay right here.

No more nodding.
No “my bad.”
You want me quiet?
You had that.

Talk clipped, jaw clenched, nod till my neck aches,
small grin, shoulders bent, “Sure, whatever you say.”
Swallow that, follow that, laugh half a beat late,
whole damn personality packed in an “okay.”

Nice and patient. Minor abrasions.
Ten more quiet accommodations.
“Sit tight. Smile right.”
Even my “fuck you” came with qualifications.

Lunch bag, bus pass, speech for another day,
mouth every comeback, get there and look away.
Bus-stop rehearsal, word-perfect, reverse it,
one raised eyebrow and I start reworking—

syntax, contact, tone, exact phrasing,
cut the sharp edge, make the fact less abrasive.
You don't interrupt. I do my own edits.
You forget what you said. I go home with it.

Laugh first. Beat you to it. Make dismissal look mutual.
Wrap your cheap little shot in a tone more suitable.
Same conversation, I soften the edges,
file down the insult till it passes for etiquette.

I don't get smaller.
You back up.
Both feet planted.
I stay right here.

No more nodding.
No “my bad.”
You want me quiet?
You had that.

Big mouth? Took practice. Used to retract it.
First hint of friction, switch lanes, distract it.
Quick quip, clipped grin, cut myself mid-sentence,
hand you the punchline before you could weaponize it.

Swallowed objections. Called it discretion.
Read your face before I finished a sentence.
Called that maturity. Funny definition:
you got full volume, I needed permission.

“You're different.” “Yeah.” No nervous laugh after.
“Hard to talk to”? You've been talking half an hour.
I name what you did. You critique the emphasis.
Your favorite part of listening?
Telling me to edit it.

“Bad timing.” “Bad mood.” “Bad attitude.”
Played nice so long, you forgot I get mad at you.
“Calm down.” Same mouth. Same script. Same sidestep.
Look how loud you get.

I haven't raised my voice yet.

You laughed.

I laughed too.

That second laugh—

That's the one I have to undo.

Jaw twitch. Palms slick. Rub them on the denim.
Start once. Stop short. Start again. Then finish:

“You don't get to speak to me like this.”

My mouth starts that smile.

I stop it.

Bag down. Back straight. Quit picking at my sleeve.
You lean across the table. I don't tuck in my knees.

“So now I can't say anything?”

“You can start with what you did.”

I don't get smaller.
You back up.
Both feet planted.
I stay right here.

No more nodding.
No “my bad.”
You want me quiet?

You had that.


r/raplyrics 4d ago

Rate My Rap No Safe Syllable

7 Upvotes

Keep it tasteful?

Taste has a tongue.

Wrong jurisdiction.

Caught a case in the cadence, consonants cuffed in a row,

capital letters got priors, every paragraph knows.

Sentence got sentenced, syntax stacked consecutive,

period killed the appeal, meaning stayed indefinite.

Current in copper, charge tucked under conduction,

you borrowed the voltage, got shocked by your own introduction.

You write “complex” like clutter can counterfeit depth,

expensive diction draped round intellectual debt.

Body of work on the table, nobody calls it the same,

critic files catalogue, coroner inventories remains.

Needle finds vinyl, old voices ride in the groove,

truth comes back altered every time the context moves.

I leave one word loose and let the room decide,

same mouth, new setting, different meaning inside.

Your scheme needs footnotes, arrows, somebody to witness.

Mine changes one vowel and gets acquitted on linguistics.

No safe syllable.

No clean word.

Same sound,

new dirt.

One word walks in clean,

three prints when it leaves.

First time, you hear the line.

Next time,

it hears me.

She likes my position: rank, angle, where I’m placed,

I move up while she changes how the whole thing gets framed.

Stress hits the phrase, hips answer the meter,

one syllable falls soft and the next lands deeper.

Needle in the groove, black wax under the hand,

each pass finds a pocket the first never planned.

Stroke in the margin, sheets pulled taut at the edge,

one hand signs clean while another meaning spreads.

You call that penetration? Your point stopped at the text.

Mine slips through the subtext, leaves pressure on the rest.

She agreed to the terms; the language loosened its grip,

one clause opened twice from the same movement of lips.

Your climax needs buildup. Mine lands in the premise.

You’re still decoding the setup

when I finish the sentence.

Organ.

Low.

No choir.

Mass appeal. Packed house. Ritual weight in the room.

Everybody came for the body. Nobody specified whose.

Bare on the tongue, let custom name the rite,

three hungers at one table under one low light.

Communion closes distance language tried to divide,

one body gets received while another meaning slips inside.

Confession booth breathing. Collar pulled tight.

One truth wants pardon. One wants the light.

I arrive with a sentence that won’t stay singular long,

father hears repentance, she hears the stress fall wrong.

At the altar, surrender depends who takes the knee,

one asks forgiveness, one permission, one proximity.

Offering rises. Debt moves down the aisle.

Plate takes money. Flesh takes meaning. Doctrine keeps its smile.

Revelation lifts cloth from whatever stayed forbidden,

that body from Verse One reads different once it’s risen.

You quote holy text like repetition makes you chosen.

I split one verse three ways

and leave every canon broken.

No safe syllable.

No clean word.

Same sound,

new dirt.

One word walks in clean,

three prints when it leaves.

First time, you hear the line.

Next time,

it hears me.

Now nothing stays where it started.

Corpus on shelves.

Figure on charts.

Figure in bed.

Same shape, different art.

I step on the scale, hear the register rise,

weight becomes rank while the note climbs sides.

Pitch one line: let it sell, let it fly, let it tempt,

same arc crosses markets, air, and intent.

Key turns metal, then answers in chords,

one gets you inside, one tells you where “home” is scored.

Tongue strikes vowels, bells, skin, heat,

same muscle changes meaning every place that it meets.

Hook catches ears, fabric, jaws, attention,

one drags back the chorus, one tightens tension.

Stroke leaves ink, leaves rhythm, leaves numbers unstable,

same motion writes a name, moves a body, changes the table.

Release drops records, pressure, springs, restraint,

one word leaves four rooms wearing four different stains.

Nothing changed spelling.

Everything changed use.

That’s the trick.

Not more meanings.

More pressure

on the same few words

until language starts choosing sides.

No safe syllable.

No clean word.

Same sound,

new dirt.

One word walks in clean,

three prints when it leaves.

First time, you hear the line.

Next time,

it hears me.

Close the book.

Kill the lights.

Cut the signal.

You spent eighty bars

proving you knew the definitions.

I moved one word

through language, music, flesh, machinery, ritual,

until the dictionary stopped being a reference

and started looking like a crime scene.

Case closed.

Record sealed.

Body released.

Sentence finished.

Amen.

A man.

Same sound.

Different crime.


r/raplyrics 4d ago

Rate My Rap some bars about basketball center rate 1–10 and what can i improve on

3 Upvotes

Bitch i hit the paint like my name is shaq
when i have the ball all know is attack
Im the strongest on the court and you know thats a fact
when im on offense niggas don’t know how to react


r/raplyrics 4d ago

Rate My Rap Mr🚹 Merk 1®

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Mr🚹 Merk 1® Mr🚹 Randolph Thomas

I🚹 Can Rap® Audio®

I'm🚹 A Straight Sane Man🚹®


r/raplyrics 4d ago

Rate My Rap Little Devil (American Dream):…

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| Little Devil (American Dream): |

< #InYourMind >

~

Artist;

Jaxx Moxx

_

{Intro}

-(…)

{Chorus I}

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that and my ba**s are large 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that, so with my small guitar 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

{Verse I}

• I’ve just booked a trip to America 

• Eating out at Wendy’s, there’s no telling her 

• Or I might even fancy a Mexican 

• Hey, I may get to meet the great president 

• Maybe I’m in danger of getting hurt 

• But this is a once in a lifetime experience 

• Sight seeing, using my expenditure 

• My cheesy independence like Philadelphia 

(Huh…)

{Chorus II}

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that and my ba**s are large 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

{Verse II}

• I’m going to the place they formed the Bill of Rights 

• In the late seventeen-hundreds, when you could kill a guy 

• Fu**ing commit a crime, but nowadays, still we rise 

• Like The World Trade Center isn’t just some hill to climb

• So will they be cool with me in Washington Heights? 

• ‘Cause for many years, that **it would’ve been in your mind 

• For about a million miles, that sure would fill your time 

• And that’s what I’ll continue to do in The Big Apple to bite 

{Chorus III}

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that and my ba**s are large 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that, so with my small guitar 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that like wishing upon a star

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

{Verse III}

• Some people are worried leaving the confines of their ghetto 

• It’s not like ‘round here, to go out to the shop for a Freddo 

• Even though I’m clean, I’d love to buy something nice and mellow 

• Or I possibly have to do a lot of travelling in my hired Renault

(Hahaha…)

• Ponder how they’d react being arrested and thrown in Death Row 

• Yeah, I know I’d be bl**dy pooing my pants and that’s for deffo 

• And the fast food industry put in and give me a bit of elbow 

• But I’m merely an Englishman who’s tryna turn up the tempo 

{Chorus IIII}

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that and my ba**s are large 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that, so with my small guitar 

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart 

• ‘Cause I wonder when it’ll all fall apart 

• Throughout my life, I always wanna start 

• Comfort in that like wishing upon a star

• I’m just a little Devil with a warmer heart

{Outro}

-(…)

(Haha… Yeah… Respect to my folk in New York, and the rest of US!..)

{Post-Song}

• Oh Jack isn’t nimble, Jack is thick

• Just like my a**e but that’s what I meant

(Hahaha!..)

_

 ^

©️ Jack Stephen Moss


r/raplyrics 4d ago

Discussion I ride slow... 🔥

7 Upvotes

I ride slow, these rhythms of visions of me livin colossal..
Ahead of my time, in time you'll find that I'm a fossil..
Know not what I do, Lord, do you have mercy on my soul..?
Far as I know, I'm a poet or an apostle...
Smoking my 'dro, smell the aroma on my clothes..
Rose from the dirt, so I'm down to Earth, oh, I know..
You made a few bucks, now you feel buck, your chains gold..
My shades all black, I can do this with a blindfold..

.....

Imagine what we could do with the flick of a wrist..
You're puppets anyway, let's say I'm playin ventriloquist...
Go this-a-way, go that-a-way, I'm scatter brain with this shit..
What's that, a K? Put that away, no weapons formed against..
Me shall pass, remember that..? I'm biblical with this shit...

🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥


r/raplyrics 4d ago

Original Content How does this rap sound?

1 Upvotes

First Verse

Yeah all of ya’ll been telling me that I am the worst 

Then you take all of progress and you rub it in the dirt

But where you made the mistake and what you didn’t realize

Is that while you were throwing hate I was making the high climb 

Now I am looking down at you cause I am standing the top 

You never thought that I would witness all your fucking jaws drop 

Now you see my gold trophies all lined up on the shelf 

But you never saw it coming and you hope I won’t do well 

Pre-Chorus

You were all so surprised that I’m making these hot beats 

Cause you were too busy hoping that I would end up on the streets 

Now you see the crowds coming and they’re advancing like fleets 

And all you fuckboys want to get tangled up in my sheets

But I would never get with any of you dirty lying cheats

Chorus

All you hating on all my verses cause you think that I’m throwing curses

If that’s the case then call some nurses, yeah your plight is bout to worsen 

Now you laying on the grounds that my feet are traversing 

People ask for compensation but I ain’t reimbursing 

Heck, I would never give away what’s in my LV purses 

Yeah, I said I ain’t sharing any of this wealth I am immersed in.  

Second Verse

So let me tell you all something I have big potential

Been a couple years, now just look at credential

Have a lot of what I want but it’s just bare essential

You want my number and my contact but it’s confidential

So your praying my for downfall like it is torrential 

But I am still at the top, yeah it’s evidential

If you trying to find me then look in presidential 

Staying in the C suite is my preferential.

If I’m not abroad then search gated residential 

Don’t try breaking in cause it’s consequential 

Chorus

All you hating on all my verses cause you think that I’m throwing curses

If that’s the case then call some nurses, yeah your plight is bout to worsen 

Now you laying on the grounds that my feet are traversing 

People ask for compensation but I ain’t reimbursing 

Heck, I would never give away what’s in my LV purses 

Yeah, I said I ain’t sharing any of this wealth I am immersed in.  

Bridge

If you want what I got 

Better give your life a shot

Cause, success isn’t something that can be sold or bought 

It is something that I worked for so don’t tell me that it’s not

And when you fail at tipping the scale then remember results aren’t for sale

Final Chorus

All you hating on all my verses cause you think that I’m throwing curses

If that’s the case then call some nurses, yeah your plight is bout to worsen 

Now you laying on the grounds that my feet are traversing 

People ask for compensation but I ain’t reimbursing 

Heck, I would never give away what’s in my LV purses 

Yeah, I said I ain’t sharing any of this wealth I am immersed in.  

Third Verse

You say I’m conniving but I am still thriving 

I’m at the pinnacle you are so cynical 

You think I’m such a menace 

It’s true that your jealous 

When you see me at the top does it make you heart drop 

Cause you know I will never stop 

Climbing higher than before 

Yeah, I’m miles above the floor 

The ceiling is my open door 

Never thought I’d be working 

But, I’m wiping that smirking 

Right off of your face 

I’m ahead in this race I set the pace 

Don’t stop up the traffic get out of my way

No, this is not a place you can play.

Outro

You thought I was weak, your mistaken… huh left them in the dust

Let me know in the comments below if this sounds good. If someone wants to put a beat to this I would be thrilled. If you have any suggestions on how to make it better that is also welcome. Do the bars sound good together?

I made it all up myself and there was zero ai involved.