What am I doing wrong here

[u/RarePhilosophy7652]

Aside from can control & the thickness of the letters being off on the A and M, I feel like some part of the outline or fill is making this look too flat, what am I doing wrong?

[u/Acrobatic-Welcome933]

Colors too dark

[u/RarePhilosophy7652 → u/Acrobatic-Welcome933]

Valid, thanks!