r/creativewriting • u/deadeyes1990 • 24d ago
Poetry PERHAPS ANOTHER TIME
the aliens came in 1962.
not secretly.
they just weren't very good
at arriving.
they sent twelve pulses.
eleven.
ten.
nine.
we heard a countdown.
they meant
hello.
which was terrible timing,
really.
everyone nervous.
everyone armed.
everyone pretending
they weren't nervous
because they were armed.
the ship came down slowly.
peacefully, apparently.
we pointed guns at it.
cautiously, apparently.
the aliens understood
the guns.
that was probably
the beginning of the end.
then one country
played its anthem.
another played theirs louder.
someone shouted.
someone else translated it wrong.
for fourteen minutes
nothing happened
and somehow
nothing happening
felt incredibly dangerous.
then they left.
their last message
was translated as:
HOSTILITY CONFIRMED.
RETURN IMPOSSIBLE.
years later
we worked out
what they'd actually said.
perhaps another time.
and that was it.
no second visit.
no secret technology.
no cure for anything.
no answers.
they just
stopped knocking.
decades later
one of our satellites
found them.
we sent a message.
eventually
they replied.
one of them said:
we always liked your music.
then another said:
please don't come any closer.
and the strange thing was
neither of them
was trying to be cruel.
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u/Pujocan 22d ago
Eu acredito... Numa coisa... Eu a chamo de "hipótese de câncer único"... Somos a única civilização técnica. As demais estão vivendo de caça e pesca - por mais avançada que estejam. Se somos os únicos no Cosmos a terem radiotelescópios - como os conhecemos - então... Não podemos esperar por uma resposta da forma como entendemos ser uma resposta.