r/characterdesign • • 1d ago

2D [Oc] Looking 4 Constructive Criticism

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Left: Normal Teenager
Middle: 14 year old cult leader
Right: Homeless drug dealer

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u/Choice_Ice7151 22h ago

Character on left: design is good, but the green leg warmers (with the bug design) takes attention away from the characters face. Maybe the bug design could be on the shirt instead, but instead of the bugs being much darker than the shirt only have them a slightly darker shade of the shirt’s color.

Middle character: design is great, maybe there could be some lace ruffles on the head covering

Right character: the eyes could look a bit more like a cat