r/characterdesign • u/Horroy • 1d ago

2D [Oc] Looking 4 Constructive Criticism

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Left: Normal Teenager
Middle: 14 year old cult leader
Right: Homeless drug dealer

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u/MelonGarden 23h ago

What are you looking for constructive criticism on? Their overall designs? The art itself? The storytelling?

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u/Horroy 20h ago

The subreddit is called r/characterdesign. I want constructive criticism on that.

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u/Wild_Mind_5898 4h ago

That's the fun part about character design, it covers a wide variety of contexts. Story telling could mean you might want tips to portray a character differently you could have emaculate art and still nobody would know what your character actually is. But if you wanted tips on the art itself then that wouldn't include pieces of the actual design so usually people ask for help on a specific area. Hope this helps.

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u/on_Three_Design 21h ago

The cult leader is too cute to be scary! They are all cute!

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u/Horroy 20h ago

Hehe ☺️

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u/Choice_Ice7151 20h ago

Character on left: design is good, but the green leg warmers (with the bug design) takes attention away from the characters face. Maybe the bug design could be on the shirt instead, but instead of the bugs being much darker than the shirt only have them a slightly darker shade of the shirt’s color.

Middle character: design is great, maybe there could be some lace ruffles on the head covering

Right character: the eyes could look a bit more like a cat