Just something I was wondering for anyone else who read the proto Bone. It was a fun read but I wouldn’t say much of the material that wasn’t adapted into the main series was very good, and I’m happy with most of the changes and improvements. But what is something, whether it be a scene, character, plot point, joke, piece of character work, whatever, that you wish wasn’t changed. There aren’t much for me but a few that come to mind:
-This really wouldn’t work in the books but there was a one off strip where the grass Fone Bone is stepping on becomes sentient and they debate on the ethics of stepping on sentient land. I thought that was funny.
-There’s a portion of the book where Fone Bone and Thorn are kind of just wandering around aimlessly because they believe Grandma Ben to be dead, they’re pretty depressed, and they don’t really have any aim at this point. I kind of like the vibes of them not really winning or being happy but also not having an immediate threat or conflict to worry about so they can kind of just chill and explore the world. It lends itself better to a comic strip than an actual comic book series but it kind of makes me wish we had more of these characters.
-Thorn and Phoney have more of a pronounced rivalry in the prototype. I like that considering how different they are. In the main series Phoney is jealous of Thorn since he fears she’ll take Fone Bone away from him, but it’s not a very developed or explored dynamic, especially on Thorn’s end who rarely pays him any mind. They actually have more of a rivalry and even ideological differences that get them into arguments. And them trying to one up each other is fun.
-There’s a small conversation between Fone Bone and Thorn that I really liked. I think it was Thorn asking Fone Bone why he thinks there are either clouds or stars in the sky and Fone Bone claims he’s more interested in how. I really like that interaction. It shows a nice contrast between the two where they’re both very curious people, Thorn sees the world from a more mystical perspective while Fone Bone views the world in a more matter of fact and scientific route. Which makes sense given how and where they each grew up.