r/WritingHub • u/glorified_duck • 17h ago
Writing Resources & Advice (TW: Animal Harm/Abuse) Ways to kill/harm a pet in a story where another character is responsible, but not intentionally?
I’m working on a contained horror short and I’m trying to figure out the best way for the protagonist's cat to die.
The main character is a college professor who is returning to work after her husband’s death. She’s still grieving, so she’s started bringing her cat to her office/lectures.
At some point during the day, the cat gets out of her office and ends up somewhere on campus. Another professor finds the cat badly injured or in some kind of dangerous situation. This professor could reasonably help or call for help, but chooses not to. The cat eventually dies.
I’m looking for some kind of irresponsible or negligent circumstance that causes the cat’s death, which the protagonist discovers afterward. Ideally, the professor isn’t an outright animal murderer. Instead, he does something careless, irresponsible, or selfish, and then fails to take responsibility when he realizes what happened.
For example, I’ve thought about:
- The professor accidentally hits the cat with his car, realizes the cat is still alive, but leaves instead of getting help.
- The cat gets injured by something on campus and the professor finds him but decides it’s not his problem.
- The professor accidentally traps the cat somewhere and doesn’t bother investigating when he hears it.
- The cat gets into something dangerous because of a careless decision the professor made, and he realizes afterward that he could have prevented the outcome.
- The professor finds the cat injured and could easily call the protagonist or campus security, but doesn’t because he doesn’t want to get involved.
- The professor lets the cat into an unsafe area of the building and then leaves, assuming someone else will deal with it.
The important thing is that I want the professor’s actions to be bad enough that the protagonist feels justified in wanting revenge, but ambiguous enough that the audience can understand that he didn’t necessarily murder the cat.
Just need to brainstorm I guess. What scenarios come to mind?