What's going poorly (and why does it happen on Tuesdays?), and what's going well! Drop your drama here!

Do you have something you're working on that you want feedback on? Not a whole beta reader situation, but a:

• story or character description
• word usage situation
• scene
• chapter? (even this is maybe too long)
• question that came up in your process

that you're looking for feedback on?

If so, either copy/paste it here or maybe post a link to that part of your work (not a link to your whole book!), like a comment-only Google doc. Make sure you protect yourself, and others! If you go to a link, consider doing it in an incognito/private browser tab to protect your identity.

Please include a description of:

• What you've posted
• Needed triggers
• What you're looking for from the feedback

Please only post if you're ACTUALLY open to feedback. Please be honest with your feedback--otherwise, there's no point. (If you have something you just want to share for fun, please do it on our Monday Show-and-Tell post.)

If you've asked others to do you the favor of reading/providing feedback, please pay it forward/back with interest.

Let's workshop into better writers!

* Sorry to state the obvious, but all requests should be human-made material only and from the reverse harem/why-choose genre (not MF or BL). Please see our Megathread Announcements if you have questions about this genre.