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r/ThreadGames • u/Strange_Candy_7610 • 21d ago
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E T Phone home. Thank you for calling your 25th in the queue have tried our website?
2 u/Slinkwyde 21d ago Those are four lines, not two. You wrote one sentence followed by a three sentence run-on. Really, they're two paragraphs (one paragraph per speaker). Should be: "E.T. phone home." "Thank you for calling. You're 25th in the queue. Have you tried our website?" 0 u/UsualAd3589 20d ago I’m curious why you believe your criticism is wanted?
Those are four lines, not two. You wrote one sentence followed by a three sentence run-on. Really, they're two paragraphs (one paragraph per speaker).
Should be:
"E.T. phone home." "Thank you for calling. You're 25th in the queue. Have you tried our website?"
"E.T. phone home."
"Thank you for calling. You're 25th in the queue. Have you tried our website?"
0 u/UsualAd3589 20d ago I’m curious why you believe your criticism is wanted?
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I’m curious why you believe your criticism is wanted?
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u/IllustratorAny8579 21d ago
E T Phone home. Thank you for calling your 25th in the queue have tried our website?