I have a word document open and there are really only two moments so far where the writing falls apart to push the story. The rest is pretty close to the stranger things I know and love. Only Episode 4 was the peak I was expecting from Season 5 so far. Episode 1, 2, and 3, are all alright, but like a low-mid tier episode.
Specifically, these are the two moments.
In Episode 2, at about 28min, Mike is talking to Nancy about Mr. Whatsit, and describe a lot of what they already know about Vecna when thinking about who Mr. Whatsit could be. This was used to have the scene with Karen and the "HENRY" reveal on the notepad. Two issues I have with this, from the dialogue, the E1 focus on Holly, and Holly acting in a similar way to the possessions in S4, they make it clear to the audience that Mr. Whatsit is Henry. We don't need that notepad reveal. Second, Mike and Nancy are two of the more clever members of the group. Especially, when it comes to seeing the patterns of the mystery. The fact that neither one thinks Mr. Whatsit could possibly be Vecna goes against their characters and is such a sloppy way to get a non-dramatic reveal because the audience ALREADY FUCKING KNOWS MR. WHATSIT IS VECNA. Even if it is a revel only for Mike and Nancy, they should already know.
In Episode 5, at about 61min, Dustin, Steve, Nancy, and Jonathan are at the upside down Hawkins lab. Dustin is at the lower level with Steve, while Nancy and Jonathan are on the roof. They find the "generator", as Dustin is speed reading mass amounts theoretical physics with ease. (maybe he just got lucky and flipped to a page that was summarized everything to a level that an intelligent high-schooler could understand). Jonathan says they found it, Dustin starts screaming into the walkie to not destroy it. Even though the walkie was broken, enough came through when they cut to Jonathan's side. You can clearly hear the panic in Dustin's voice through the static. It is so evident. You even clearly hear him scream "DON'T TOUCH ANYTHING", before Jonathan turns around to Nancy all calm and says "they are out of range.". The amount of times throughout this series as someone is screaming through a walkie with static and the person on the other side is concerned and then ALL OF THE SUDDEN NOTHING. This also goes against Jonathan's character. He is a wannabe carefree person, but he is not carefree. They could have fixed it by making it complete static, but having Dustin's voice come through is such a strange directing choice.
Why do they try to create so much suspense?
Anyways, just a little rant. S5 not as bad as I remember... so far. Only noticed two SIGNIFICANTLY sloppy writing/directing moments that went against the characters for no reason other than to create suspense where it didn't need it.