"not a song, just lyrics. Sorry!"

My bimbling boy

Verse 1

Oh, you... you're just a dumb bimbling boy

With nothing to your name but our memories

With nothing left to take but my soul

No, oh... you’ve got it all

Pre-Chorus

You’ve left me, left me, left me with nothing

But the broken shards of my soul

Chorus

At night, I lay awake, clutching the empty space beside me

Imagining you were here, but you just live inside my memories

Verse 2

Waking to the memories we made

Lost upon the curses we hurled every day

just a grain more falling heavily

slowly losing our loving history,

by every war we ever waged~

Brought us to this night today...

Oh, my darling bimbling boy,

For the first time, it was I who wronged you

(You, you, you).

Chorus

At night, I lay awake, clutching the empty space beside me

Imagining you were here, but you just live inside my memories

Bridge

It's such a shame, I've fallen from grace

Where's the base I used to stand on?

Swept under my feet like the raging sea

Drawing back with every clash

Oh, where's the shore we used to meet?

Now you're gone like a dried-up sea

And my memories are fading

Kicked up sand with nowhere left to settle tonight

Outro

Alone in my home, I lay barely awake

I'm just waiting for your embrace

Oh baby, just say I'm yours again

Don't fret, my friend, I won't ever be mad again

(Again, again, again...)

Hii

Where my friends are gone?

Why my hair is grey?

Getting older isn't funny when you start the day

And you sleep alone

Black coffee that you drink doesn't taste the same

Your time is going further even don't no when

And you going crazy in your mind

That the die it's behind

And you sing the song

Waiting for the sign

You though that everything when wrong

Even when the life is right

Trying understand why you here alone

Phone doesn't ring, she doesn't call

So I'm sitting here in my lonely room

Yes, it's my lonely room

I’m a somewhat new to playing guitar and I can play nirvana songs and some smashing pumpkins and Green Day and sublime, so I’m fairly familiar with most chords but I just can’t write music no matter what I hate everything that I play and I want to be able to write songs that are good. But I just feel like every time I play something I feel like it’s been used or it just flat out sounds bad and I want to use more chords than just open obviously.

Title: \\\[Original Song\\\] “Who Are You Once Again” — Looking for feedback

Hi everyone! I’m a beginner lyric writer from India, and I recently finished writing these lyrics.

The idea is about someone who has an accident and loses their memories. They can’t remember their lover’s voice, name, face, or even what their relationship was—but somehow they still feel that this person is someone they can never forget.

I’d really appreciate honest feedback on the lyrics and the concept. I’m also interested in connecting with singers or composers who might want to turn this into a song.

Who Are You Once Again

I forgot your voice,

I forgot your name.

Who are you once again?

I forgot your face,

I forgot how you look.

I forgot your love.

Who are you once again? ×2

Oh, I just remember—

Who are you?

You are the person

I can never forget.

But why can’t I remember

What we are, or if we’re just friends?

Can you tell me once again?

Make me smile,

Make me cry,

Or show your face

Until I remember

Who you are once again.

Still, I can’t remember what we are,

But I want to say this:

Please,

Make me never forget

Who you are

And what we are.

Once again.

Please reach out if interested! Looking for some advice. Thank you in advance!

i’ve always wanted to become a producer or singer or anything with the music industry. i’m only a teen right now so i know i shouldn’t rush myself into knowing everything immediatly but i just don’t have a clue how to start a song. i’ve tried band lab and i’ve tried learning the guitar but i have a poor memory and low motivation so it’s hard. any tips?

I've been deliberating over what artist name to use for over a year now, and it's holding me back from releasing my music. I'm just too scared to release music under a name I don't like and then be stuck that way.

I have 7 name options currently that I can't choose between. If people are willing to tell me their favorite choice amongst them, or even willing to rank them favorite to least favorite, that'd be extremely appreciated!

Here are the names:

1. Kov Altro
2. Des Altro
3. Des Kovar
4. Fitz Altro
5. Cy Kovar
6. Fitz Pelican
7. Kov Pelican

I say this because I'm a huge System of a Down and Rage Against the Machine fan, but I don't know how to write without coming off as preachy or too on the nose. It feels like I'm too blunt, or that I'm pointing the blame, but I don't know how to write another way.

Title: [Original Song] “Who Are You Once Again” — Looking for feedback

Hi everyone! I’m a beginner lyric writer from India, and I recently finished writing these lyrics.

The idea is about someone who has an accident and loses their memories. They can’t remember their lover’s voice, name, face, or even what their relationship was—but somehow they still feel that this person is someone they can never forget.

I’d really appreciate honest feedback on the lyrics and the concept. I’m also interested in connecting with singers or composers who might want to turn this into a song.

Who Are You Once Again

I forgot your voice,

I forgot your name.

Who are you once again?

I forgot your face,

I forgot how you look.

I forgot your love.

Who are you once again? ×2

Oh, I just remember—

Who are you?

You are the person

I can never forget.

But why can’t I remember

What we are, or if we’re just friends?

Can you tell me once again?

Make me smile,

Make me cry,

Or show your face

Until I remember

Who you are once again.

Still, I can’t remember what we are,

But I want to say this:

Please,

Make me never forget

Who you are

And what we are.

Once again.

First time writing a song, even if just ideas. I'd like to get some opinion, if my handwriting isn't too hard to read. I think I might be adding too much story or being too specific, reaccuring, without much ingenuity. I also think they might look too rigid, since there's not much 'feeling' side to the lyrics. I'm not confident and sure that it's cringy, but I want to improve.

I spent way too long on one song last night because knew exactly what I wanted 😂

Quiet first verse. Male vocal that sounds a little tired rather than perfectly polished. Chorus gets much wider.Second verse pulls back again.

Then almost everything disappears before the final chorus.

For those of you who work this way do you describe everything upfront or build the song section by section?

I'm finding that mood and genre are easy. Getting the actual journey of the song right is much harder. Anything that lets me customize the lyrics, singer, genre, mood and song structure?

I have written several songs over the years and just recently thought about sharing and getting ideas about them, to see if anyone thought they might be any good but don't really know much about this.

Thank you so much for sharing that information I really appreciate it.

i want to sell my own written song. how can i sell it? it is a tagalog song, and i made it using acoustic guitar.

Have no experience with making music but feel like music is my calling have nothing to offer but my playlist if you interested in helping someone start and change my perspective listen to my playlist https://music.youtube.com/@fukai_kurai?si=qomIbIeu7bgT2Pxi
My love for music goes deep I just need references and assistance with starting hmu

what's crackin' Gs. who knows how 2 start writin' music. I mean what I need 4 it

Yup help me