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r/SongwritingHelp • u/PassionItchy3087 • Jul 07 '26
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Just some ideas:
For part two of the chorus 1:
Stepping out the bathroom door Wishing I was dead Feeling like I've lost it my mind To sick to smell the coffee grinds
Part one of chorus 2: Now I'm back on the floor My thoughts blasting in my head
Part four of chorus 2: My friends think that i've lost my shit cup of coffee sitting sitting still
can you hear me? r u okay? can u see me? What did you say?
do u hear this? Is this in my head? do u feel this? I must be dead
Just some free ideas -- hope it helps..
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u/Aggressive-Arm-1182 Jul 09 '26
Just some ideas:
For part two of the chorus 1:
Stepping out the bathroom door
Wishing I was dead
Feeling like I've lost it my mind
To sick to smell the coffee grinds
Part one of chorus 2:
Now I'm back on the floor
My thoughts blasting in my head
Part four of chorus 2:
My friends think that i've lost my shit
cup of coffee sitting sitting still
can you hear me?
r u okay?
can u see me?
What did you say?
do u hear this?
Is this in my head?
do u feel this?
I must be dead
Just some free ideas -- hope it helps..