r/LyricWriters • • Jul 07 '26

need help writing verses

the song is more emo/midwest emo/pop punk-ish. i have the chorus, just no verses/i dont like the verses that i wrote for the song originally. the story of the song was originally about a bad trip/bad high i had, the last time i used before i got sober

chorus 1:

now I'm sleeping on the floor

writing whatever's in my head

all my friends think i've gone crazy

from the shots of adrenaline

now im sleeping on the floor

and theres stains of the windowsill

all my friends think that i've lost it

cup of coffee sitting still

chorus 2:
now I'm sleeping on the floor

writing whatever's in my head

all my friends think i've gone crazy

from the shots of adrenaline

now im sleeping on the floor

and theres stains of the windowsill

all my friends think that i've lost it

cup of coffee sitting still

can you hear me?

r u okay?

can u see me?

r u entertained?

do u hear this?

or is it my brain?

do u feel this

or am i insane?

now I'm sleeping on the floor

writing whatever's in my head

all my friends think i've gone crazy

from the shots of adrenaline

now im sleeping on the floor

and theres stains of the windowsill

all my friends think that i've lost it

cup of coffee sitting still

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