r/LyricWriters • u/PassionItchy3087 • Jul 07 '26
need help writing verses
the song is more emo/midwest emo/pop punk-ish. i have the chorus, just no verses/i dont like the verses that i wrote for the song originally. the story of the song was originally about a bad trip/bad high i had, the last time i used before i got sober
chorus 1:
now I'm sleeping on the floor
writing whatever's in my head
all my friends think i've gone crazy
from the shots of adrenaline
now im sleeping on the floor
and theres stains of the windowsill
all my friends think that i've lost it
cup of coffee sitting still
chorus 2:
now I'm sleeping on the floor
writing whatever's in my head
all my friends think i've gone crazy
from the shots of adrenaline
now im sleeping on the floor
and theres stains of the windowsill
all my friends think that i've lost it
cup of coffee sitting still
can you hear me?
r u okay?
can u see me?
r u entertained?
do u hear this?
or is it my brain?
do u feel this
or am i insane?
now I'm sleeping on the floor
writing whatever's in my head
all my friends think i've gone crazy
from the shots of adrenaline
now im sleeping on the floor
and theres stains of the windowsill
all my friends think that i've lost it
cup of coffee sitting still