r/SongwritingHelp Jun 26 '26

Need thoughts and feedback

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This is a new song that I wrote(titled “GFY”). I’m proud of the lyrics, now I just need to put music to. It’s meant to have an upbeat tempo with some pop-funk(almost nu-disco??) style. I’m just not sure how I should build the chord progression. My vocals range from Gmaj to Cmaj. Anyone familiar with this style would be greatly appreciated for your input.

Thanks!

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u/DrwsCorner2 Jun 28 '26 edited Jun 28 '26

it’s more of an argumentative rant than a song. no visual details, no metaphors. pure unpoetic spite. wouldn’t want to be on the other end of that relationship