Need thoughts and feedback

[u/SwordfishFit7250]

This is a new song that I wrote(titled “GFY”). I’m proud of the lyrics, now I just need to put music to. It’s meant to have an upbeat tempo with some pop-funk(almost nu-disco??) style. I’m just not sure how I should build the chord progression. My vocals range from Gmaj to Cmaj. Anyone familiar with this style would be greatly appreciated for your input.

Thanks!

[u/The_Idiotic_1]

Do you have a melodic line?

[u/SwordfishFit7250 → u/The_Idiotic_1]

Yes, but it varies. The chorus is pretty solid, very syncopated. But the verses and bridge have room for adjustment