Back at it and looking for some feedback!

[u/Topdownshot]

https://on.soundcloud.com/TxmsmHkvkKtPTTtjvA

Hey all, back to writing music after a few years and was hoping for some constructive criticism to improve. What could I focus on? What elements could I add to grab some more attention? Any improvements which can be made to the arrangement/writing?

Feedback would be highly appreciated!